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Published: 2012-10-24 19:32:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 731; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 4
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Vietnam landscape conceptPencil line, Photoshop color
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This is a lovely piece, I love how you managed to put focus on the foreground, making the petals very distinguished. Your use of color is also wisely chosen. The use of cool colors is a good resemblance of a sunset on a cold day.
However, I must point out the perspective of your pagoda seems off. It looks like it's leaning towards the viewer, given the way the rooftops are pointing down. Perhaps if the rooftops are thinner and not pointing down so much, it will look straight. You can also blend the rooftop tiles a bit to pull out the trees in the foreground. Finally, check your painting with a straightening object using sight-measuring techniques. Your tower is also leaning towards to the side, leaving the rooftops uneven.
Overall, as I have said, it is a lovely piece. I'm not sure if you would want a critique, considering the piece was made a few months ago.
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Is ever a pleasure to receive a critique to a work, and i appreciate much. I think this was one of my first landscapes, i made in summer, and perspective is not my speciality, i still have problems with this, i never draw scenery before cuz perspective scary me, (is a bad monster), by the way i take ur advice and i will correct this and remember for next works, thanks again for critique
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