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Published: 2009-09-27 16:08:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 503; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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Description Art Request by my student, Nemnem

*takes deep breathe*

I hope these two guys don't need introduction. If they do it means i failed beyond all reason...! Bwah, the anatomy is not impressive... nor are their poses... and they don't even look LIKE who they're supposed to be... heck, even the 'effects' or whatever you call them is lame... i saw some artworks that do cool effects, too bad it didn't work out for me...

Actually, this is the reason why i usually shun from doing fanarts of the Masters... fans around the world can easily see what is WRONG with them... *eats my own hand*

The idea of the police and the soldier came from what i knew of the tension between these two forces in my country.

Because the military was directly under the Sultan's order, their superiority were a notch higher than the police eventhough they possess the same ranks.

Also, the machine gun symbolizes a greater power compared to the handgun. Sounds familiar, eh?

So much for ideas...

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-mechanical pencil
-effects with Photoshop
-Characters belong to Kishimoto Masashi and respectively
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Comments: 47

netamashii [2010-01-04 09:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I love Sasuke with a tie and suit!

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to netamashii [2010-01-20 14:46:21 +0000 UTC]

he's a hunk alright~! lol!

and thanks for the fave btw!

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netamashii In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2010-01-20 14:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Hunk indeed.
You're welcome, it was my pleasure!

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to netamashii [2010-01-20 15:09:17 +0000 UTC]

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Fallen-Wishzz [2009-11-10 00:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow... (only word to describe it) LOL

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Fallen-Wishzz [2009-11-10 16:17:52 +0000 UTC]

lol, it's not my best works... the effects didn't pull off at all, ya know

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Fallen-Wishzz In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-12-09 01:45:28 +0000 UTC]

: /
I'm no professional art critic.. so i wouldn't know.

All I know is.. my eyes are just a "little bit" above the average standards.. so... I AIN'T NO PRO! xD

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Fallen-Wishzz [2009-12-15 05:05:04 +0000 UTC]

no worries on that. everyone improves with time...

unless you're the type who hates criticism... then that's a different matter.. (i never get those people... but it's personal, i guess)

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Fallen-Wishzz In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-12-21 02:01:46 +0000 UTC]

'TIs true.
But the question is, does one improve if one doesn't draw for a long time? But by only looking at other's drawings?
(two separate questions)

Hm.. I think I'm ASKING for criticism instead of avoiding/hating them. Personal?Do you hate criticism?

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Fallen-Wishzz [2009-12-21 10:39:24 +0000 UTC]

It depends. Sometimes, if you take a break, you'll realize what went wrong with ur drawing.

As for only looking, it also depends on whether you scrutinize carefully how it's done. I've ogled tonnes of artworks, but i find i can only improve after i dutifully note and observe how the artist did it, and then try to emulate it.

Nah, in fact... i welcome criticism. it's the only way to improve faster. but i know of some who just hates to be critiqued...

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hisaru [2009-10-07 13:31:30 +0000 UTC]

police officer VS sergeant army

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to hisaru [2009-10-07 14:59:05 +0000 UTC]

yeah... XD

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hisaru In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-10-07 15:02:24 +0000 UTC]

i think police officer will win since its sasuke and the gun pointed on naruto's head >D

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to hisaru [2009-10-07 15:15:12 +0000 UTC]

owh... but naruto has a MACHINE GUN...!

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hisaru In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-10-07 15:28:32 +0000 UTC]

but even naruto points the gun at sasuke, he's still the one who dies first coz ppl cannot live without the head! >D

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to hisaru [2009-10-07 15:34:37 +0000 UTC]

NOO~~!! the main protagonist must not die...!!

fufufu... poor naruto. he always loses to sasuke... maybe that's why i like him, lol

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hisaru In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-10-19 09:22:34 +0000 UTC]

oh ya like naruto? O_O well, i dont like him but i like his fox demon chakura XDD wanna steal it someday XD

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to hisaru [2009-10-19 10:28:51 +0000 UTC]

nyehehe... i like naruto more than sasuke, but shikamaru and chouji are the coolest lol, yeah! so much power should not be wasted on just him... fufufu

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hisaru In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-11-02 07:31:21 +0000 UTC]

hell yeah! i like shikamaru! he's a very cool leader!

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to hisaru [2009-11-04 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah..!

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phikaphi [2009-10-04 09:18:53 +0000 UTC]

This is nice, Hachi!LOL.

No flaws.

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to phikaphi [2009-10-07 03:36:34 +0000 UTC]

really? i thought the effects suck like hell... huhu...

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phikaphi In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-10-07 08:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you.
Really.

huhuhu..

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to phikaphi [2009-10-07 14:39:26 +0000 UTC]

huhu..

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manusia89 [2009-10-03 08:43:21 +0000 UTC]

cool IdEa anD drAwinG!

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to manusia89 [2009-10-07 02:51:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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youeill [2009-10-02 10:07:16 +0000 UTC]


how can u ever think of somethin like this
really nice

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to youeill [2009-10-07 03:34:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you..! XD

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AniArie [2009-09-30 08:57:13 +0000 UTC]

hehehe nice

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to AniArie [2009-10-01 05:47:23 +0000 UTC]

really? lol, thanks!

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midnightdream2 [2009-09-29 19:17:24 +0000 UTC]

its wow thats all i can say

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to midnightdream2 [2009-09-30 05:55:25 +0000 UTC]

lol, thanks! XD

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ABping [2009-09-28 05:25:11 +0000 UTC]

I like the soldier concept. Shoot him in the head!

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to ABping [2009-09-28 05:53:07 +0000 UTC]

yeah, kill the sasuke traitor...!

thanks!!

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ABping In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-09-28 05:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Sasuke well yeah, he's betraying for good. Konoha is the real enemy afterall.

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to ABping [2009-09-30 06:25:36 +0000 UTC]

oh, i still vote for Naruto though... lol! Naruto ftw...!

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D33Force [2009-09-27 18:12:49 +0000 UTC]

woah, i really love this, i dont even like naruto but this pic is amazing XD

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to D33Force [2009-09-28 05:06:39 +0000 UTC]

O_O you like this...?

gosh, thank you..!

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D33Force In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2010-01-25 15:00:17 +0000 UTC]

like it? i LOVE IT and i get so sick of naruto everywher but i LOVE it in your style holy cow OTL I CANT STOP LOOKING YOU DID SO AMAZING

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Meihara [2009-09-27 16:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Lolz

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Meihara [2009-09-27 16:21:09 +0000 UTC]



is it... funny..?

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Meihara In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-09-27 16:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Lol, why are you crying?
I thought your intention to make this drawing was because it was a funny idea and yes it is a funny idea; sasuke and naruto killing each other with guns so stop crying, k?
anyway, about the "actually, this is the reason why i usually shun from doing fanarts of the Masters... fans around the world can easily see what is WRONG with them...", well you can't just perfect them instantly. That's why we draw and draw until we could get as close as we could to the original. ^^v

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Meihara [2009-09-28 04:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Owh... *wipes off crocodile tears*

i suppose it does sound funny... but those two did try to kill each other before... lol, good point.

my student loved Naruto and requested for these two in a fight, and since I dunno, my own style is sorta different... the fanart turned out not as i expected... but then of course, as you said... we have to practice a lot, and well, this is my first time drawing them as a fanart.

gosh, sorry for spewing nonsense... i tend to do that sometimes.

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Meihara In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-09-28 19:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I mean the idea of them using guns to kill each other was funny.

Yeah, it's also difficult for me to draw naruto characters since their 'drawing style' is kinda different from the usual pretty anime style. Drawing shoujo characters are waaay easier to do.

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Meihara [2009-09-30 06:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that one!

Yeah, ditto on that one
Really? I find shojo lines too clean and curvy for me... lol!

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Meihara In reply to ClumsyBlunder [2009-10-01 01:34:37 +0000 UTC]

yep. That's why they are way easier to drawn and also easier for people to be impressed by it. Like those Cardcaptor Sakura and Clamp-like drawings, people always swoon over them.
Unlike the character design in Naruto. At first, I didn't like how short the women's legs are and the design lacks luster (anime ver.). But after some time, it kinda grew on me that the art style kinda unique and cool

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ClumsyBlunder In reply to Meihara [2009-10-01 05:11:02 +0000 UTC]

lol, ditto here

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