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Published: 2013-04-16 16:48:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 6745; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 13
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My first angsty edition on Jackunzel and I'd like to know your ideas on what's happening in the picture/what will happen.
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Jack has the ability to travel through time. One day, he traveled to a kingdom where the king and queen were about to have a child. Jack knew Rapunzel since she was a baby. Upon finding out about her kidnapping, he watched over her as she grew up in the tower, doing little things to help her like catching her before she falls. Through the years, Jack starts creating feelings or her and plans that on her 18th birthday, he would convince her to come with him and see the floating lights. However, around this time, Jack was called back to the modern world to help fight Pitch. Even though the battle only took a couple days, when Jack came back to Corona, years have passed and Rapunzel has already been married. One day while Rapunzel is alone in her bedroom, Jack uses a spell so he can see her. He tells her of what he's been doing with her throughout the years, and Rapunzel feels terrible. Jack tries to leave and tell her he'll be fine, but Rapunzel stops him.
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Then what happens? Does she leave her life for a life together with Jack or must she stay behind and live in heartbreak?
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They stare each other straight in the eyes, leaning closer and closer and closer until...
Jack jerks back, gasping in fear.
JACK: No! No. I...
RAPUNZEL: But Jack...I...
JACK: I know...but it's...a little soon.
Rapunzel lowers her eyes, reminiscing.
RAPUNZEL: I understand...
Right outside, a creature got out from the bush near the window.
SWEETIE BELLE: OH, COME ON!!!
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xDD Loved the mlp crossover ;D
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If I was in jacks position right now when Rapunzel told him she was pregnant I would probably faint
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xD or freeze like Ross in Friends when Rachel tells him.
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Rapunzel: "Jack, there's something I have to tell you."
Jack: "What's wrong? Is everything alright?"
Rapunzel: "Jack, I'm.... I'm.... pregnant."
Jack: *goes wide-eyed* What?! *almost starts to hyperventilate* "I... You... Pregnant?!"
Rapunzel: I know, Jack. I was also shocked when I found out."
Jack: "I can't believe this is happening. Why didn't you tell me earlier?"
Rapunzel: "I didn't want you to freak out."
Jack: "I can't believe this. When did you find out you were... pregnant?"
Rapunzel: "Two days ago."
Jack: "I cannot believe this."
Rapunzel: "I know, Jack. I know."
Jack: *goes up to Rapunzel and hugs her*
Rapunzel: *hugs Jack back*
Jack: "You think we'll be able to take care of this child?"
Rapunzel: *smiles* I'm pretty sure that we'll do good.
That's my idea on what's going on in this picture.
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aaaws : ) a sweet vision <3
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I know. I'm a big Jackunzel fan.
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Same here 
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oh noes >.< I wonder if they can work it out
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that would be a shocker xD
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My idea:
Punzie is getting a little tired and stressed because she and Jack have been having fun (not that kind of "fun"!) and she sort of snapped at him and he snapped back and felt terrible
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omg romano avatar!!!!!!!!!!
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I hope they make up in the end ^^
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Me too! (I don't know my own imaginatioN!)
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Mayby I'll make a picture of them making up tomorrow
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When I see this, she's clearly said something that upset him and hit him hard. Maybe they were in a fight and she said something she didn't mean. Maybe she mentioned his sister and said it was his fault that she almost died and that he left her.
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that would definetely hurt him >.<
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Ok, I think Jack just found out that Punzie is cheating on him, with his best friend Eugene no less!
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That would definetely hurt :/ and thanks for the favs
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"but jack..I..love you.."
that's my fantasy of what is happening in the picture! xD
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Jack's heart skips a beat when Punzie's words reach his ears. He turns around surprised and stares at Rapunzel.
"What did you day?" Jack asks hesitantly. Did he just hear what he thinks he heard. Did he hear the words he has wanted to hear, wanted to say himself the moment they met.
"I..I.." Rapunzel stutters. What did she just say. No..this could ruin everything. What if Jack doesn't feel the same way. What if..she stops her panicky thoughts and sighs while a smile spreads on her fave and she lifts her head to meet Jack's bright blue eyes. "I said that.. I love you Jack." What good does it do to worry on what if's. Although I didn't mean to say those words..I meant them. And I wanted to say them. No matter the out--
Rapunzel freezes. Even her thoughts do when she feels Jack embracing her. "Ja--"
"I love you." Now it's Rapunzel's heart's turn to skip a beat.
"I love you."
"I love you."
With each I love you, Jack tighten's his embrace on Rapunzel and nuzzles on her hair and neck. While Rapunzel's heart skips a beat with each I love you he hears and feels from Jack. Rapunzel lifts her arms to embrace Jack back. And although Jack is cold, Rapunzel doesn't feel any of that. All she can feel is the warmth in her heart. The warmth of love.
sorry..>.< when you wrote that, this just..came out xD
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you should go on a site called wattpad it is for writers like you
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I have never heard of such a site but perhaps I'll check it out ^^ I have written a whole story based on the picture and that short writing piece code1412.deviantart.com/art/I-… if you're interested ^^
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that story made me cry so bad I felt like my insides were turning inside out, but it was really good
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I'm both sorry and glad that my story made you cry
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HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey do you want a cookie
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I'm always up for a cookie
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chocolate chip, nuts, raisins or m&m's
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ooh..that's a tough one..but lets use the process of elimination
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you chose a wise choice young one*says in a peaceful tone*MILK!?!?!?!?!!!!????!?!?!?!?!
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thanks
So you provide the cookies and I'll bring the milk
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oh don't worry y friend is lactose intolerant so I have that milk to IM ALWAY PREPARED!!!!!!!!well im not but you the picture
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I know what u mean sistah
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hey what is your name
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Michaela *say it like makayla* it is a weird name I know
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