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Published: 2018-08-30 00:54:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 1
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I am so proud of this tbhIt took me three days to finish this, and it was worth it
And can I just say how much I love Maria Reynolds? XD
Please comment below what you think, I'd really like to hear
Hope you all enjoy!
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Hamilton (c) Lin-Manuel Miranda
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Comments: 33
Wow your humans have improved phenomenally. I love her pose and expression! The colors you used make it go together so well! Things Iβd recommend would be making the face more symmetrical. The eyes look a little strange. Hands are really hard but I think you did a good job on them! Her ear could also be a bit bigger.
You did a really good job on her skirt. I love how puffy it is XD. Also her hair could cover more of her scalp. The rest of her hair is amazing! I love how it twists around her body. Great job on this!!!
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Thank you for the critique!
I agree, the eyes just don't look right, my layers got messed up, so the eyes just don't look as symmetrical as I would've liked. Same with the hands, to me they look awful lol
The hair on the one side is supposed to be pulled back more, that's my design for her. As her bangs cover the one side of her face 
Anyways thank you so much! This was a very fair and helpful critique, and I appreciate very much!
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This is actually really good! There isn't much that needs improving tbh.
I'll start with the eyes; they're very good and original, however, they're asymmetrical.
this actually very easy to fix after some practice! The best way to do this is by perfectly mirroring the that is looking closest to the viewers. After that you add small details to the eye (etc. smaller, angled, that type of thing). It gives off more symmetry!
The second thing that needs a bit of editing is the breasts. Again, really easy to fix, it's just a bit of an anatomy issue.
You see, if you want her to be wearing a corset, like she is in this picture, then her junk needs to be further up on her chest. It would also be useful if the her right breast (or left from our view) was more to the side of her chest, that way it shows that her dress is going over her breasts, not her chest (because it's us lady's breasts that develop, not our chest e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l⦠" width="19" height="21" alt="
Other than those few things, this is an incredible piece of art and you should definitely feel proud of it!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much!!
I myself agree, the breasts got messed up, I think with me trying to redo it over an over again messed it up
And the eyes aren't as symmetrical as I wanted lol
Anyways thank you for the critique, it was fair and helpful!
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Np!
Ah, well it's good to see you pick up on your own mistakes! that's an important trait in artists!
np and thank you!
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omg this is really good!!! You captured everything about Maria perfectly!!!! I just... can't say no to it!
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Same lol!
And thank you so much!
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# MariareynoldsneedsmoreloveΒ
Fantastic work on this!
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Thank you so much!
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LOOK
AT
THIS
LOOK AT HOW MUCH YOU'VE IMPROVED
ISTG YOU'RE DOING SO WELL AND HAVE COME SO FAR AS AN ARTIST
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
REALLY MEANS A LOT HJGJHKJHIGIUHJILK
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NO PROBLEM ITS TRUE GBSEIURVBTSYUEG
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ayyye i made a way crappeir version of this x DΒ
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I'm sure it's beautiful,
this isn't my best tbh
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idk
but its still pretty-
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Thank you so much!!!
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Thank you so much, but do other people like it tho?
I'm proud of this, but I don't have that many favorites in this X'D
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Well, my favorite thing almost has no faves
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Thank you so much!
I tried to make this look amazing lol
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