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Published: 2010-04-29 14:10:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1032; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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I love the look of water and sand you created; the textures really add a sense of fluidity. The black spiral shape has wonderful dimension and a very dramatic impact. The only thing that bothers me a little is the texture of the spheres. In my opinion, they should either be totally smooth and pearl-like or have a very fine texture.
Overall, this is amazing. The long, narrow format is perfect. It allows they eye to travel along the path created by the black. One usually associates blues/greens with water but you've really achieved a fabulous image with these more neutral tones.
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A wise judgment expressed in simple and straightforward words. I bet daigian will love this critique. I do
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Thank you. It's my first real "critique."
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Thanks for the critique, I appreciate that so much! 
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=DothackersDaichi and I seem to disagree about everything except the colors. Does that leave you 
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Nope. 
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Well... I can start by saying the i love the colour palette in this fractal. I always loved black/amber colours. Secondly, I can also say that i like the pearls or whatever they are supposed to be e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
but if i have to look at the cons, I would point out that the fractal has a bad flow and it is textured too boldly. The textures takes the attention away from the black and doesn't seem to fit in... And i honestly think that is a shame. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I hope the critique helped a little ...
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Thanks
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Yeah, it does. But the colours are awesome (Yes, i spell it with U... don't blame me... i'm a bloody limey
fun fact: The critique was exactly at 100 words.
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So compelling it had to be favoured. I became fascinated by the 'fractal dust' of pearls in diminishing sizes. Fractal dusts don't seem to figure prominently in most of the work I see.
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Lovely colour palette and the image has great fluidity ~ very well named too! 
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You are most wellcome!!
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You're most welcome, dear!
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A lovely piece... Truly reminiscent of a shallow tidal pool full of tiny organisms flitting about in the dwindling waters...
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Damn. FractalEyes beat me to criticizing this work. Oh well, I'll soon catch up.
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I agree with =daigian especially now that =DothackersDaichi and I have given such conflicting critiques; the only thing we agree on is the wonderful colors... make that colours.
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