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Published: 2004-02-02 05:17:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 17
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Eyes fixated on eyes,they held each other,
absorbing the darkness,
bleeding their pain.
Hands clenched to skin,
they sat so lonesome,
plagued by emptiness,
drained of their colours.
Legs beaded with water,
they comforted each other,
shivering, gasping with every gust,
choking from their hate.
Thoughts left to wonder,
they sang to each other,
disguising the agony,
longing to breathe tommorrow.
Comments: 8
i love your words.
The just seem as if the words were designed to fit in that exact place in the poem.
I've decided i'm your biggest fan!
btw, this is a fav of mine, just thought i should announce it
izy
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yay i gotta fan! ive never had a fan before.hmm. anyway thanks for all your comments. you rock
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That's so awesome! It's very descriptive and it just flows so well. ^^ I really like it!
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"Don't look at me in that tone of voice."
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