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Published: 2011-06-27 10:05:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description I think everything is starting to freeze
I guessed I found it easy to believe
that one wrong move and life can get cold
or am I just getting really old

I feel like I am losing myself
Maybe I should get some help
Whenever I tried to speak, no words came
So I cried in the shower and during the rain

What else was I supposed to do?
Nothing could been done but is that true?
The earth is spinning ever so slowly
and with each turn, am I getting more Lonely?

Hatred, getting more complicated
Love, getting more frustrated
Life, getting more obligated
Death, getting more incinerated

Life is slowing me down
but there is no one turning around
Love is just another hate
I don't feel like another worthless date

Do you ever feel this way?
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Comments: 10

Koosh138 [2011-06-27 22:46:18 +0000 UTC]

I actually feel like the world is spinning faster.

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ColdAmuChan In reply to Koosh138 [2011-06-28 06:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Some people may feel that way. I write what i feel and many feel what i write. Not everyone feels the same way ^_^

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soulesspoet365 [2011-06-27 10:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I to have written similar feelings numerous times. So no you aren't alone.
Nice poem by the way I like the back end of it mainly especially where you slow it all down and mention and highlight hate, love, death and life.

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ColdAmuChan In reply to soulesspoet365 [2011-06-27 10:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^_^

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soulesspoet365 In reply to ColdAmuChan [2011-06-27 10:19:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem I hope I have provided some light to brighten the damp and coldness you are having...

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ColdAmuChan In reply to soulesspoet365 [2011-06-27 10:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes you have, thank you very much. But no matter how many try, no one can light up my gloom except one person but he is dead to me now.

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soulesspoet365 In reply to ColdAmuChan [2011-06-27 11:17:06 +0000 UTC]

I hope you find something or someone to replace him in the future. Have a good one

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ColdAmuChan In reply to soulesspoet365 [2011-06-28 06:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol thank you but im asexual so I don't believe I can find anyone. Nor would I want to.

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GoddessImbrium [2011-06-27 10:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Perfect, know the feeling.

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ColdAmuChan In reply to GoddessImbrium [2011-06-27 10:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for letting me know ^_^

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