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Published: 2006-06-17 00:44:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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She dancedin the rain today
ignored her problems
silly complications
of life
She ran
away from forces
trying to pull her
down into this despair
called home
She smiled
for real this time
and thought not about
anything that ailed her
at all
And she thought about
all the tears she cried
how silly
it was
And she threw away
all her adult thoughts
her worry
and pain
And, of course, she did
sing a little song
maybe just
to him
And, of course, she must
look both ways before
she crosses
his mind
She danced
away memories
how life should not be
that sharp pain in her side
was gone
She even blew the sky a kiss
because it knew she needed this.
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Comments: 32
This is quite cute; reminds me of a character of mine. 
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I figured I had to check your site cuz u seemed like a good writer, and I spose I was right. I really liked this poem. I don't usually get all open ended poems because they are too open and confusing, but this was just simple enough where it told of a whole story, or atleast that's what I saw. I do realize that u were writing this as u went along, but just know that it needs a little rewording here and there. What I absolutly loved was how u added her love in there. sorta added more meaning to her dancing.
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I really like this.
And all your writings really.
For some reason, I think we have a similar style, because I can see some of your thoughts in what I would write about. And that's fantastic. We're both original, of course, but it's nice to know that you aren't alone in your thoughts, sometimes.
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It is. Thank you. 8)
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^-^ you're welcome
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Thank you. I'm glad you do.
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I'm glad you're glad I do.
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I'm glad we're both glad. 8)
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I really like the last part. <3 Funny how many times I have done such a thing as dancing away my problems in the rain.
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It is quite amazing.
Thank you for the favourite.
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The rain has healing powers!
You're welcome.
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you really touched my feelings there .. i love this... its so amazing , this emotions that she has makes me cry , and the way she shows them , by dancing , crying , and all these , moved me impressivelly , keep up im ready to hear from you , i was just browsing and ,, its the first time i stop by and read stuff like this , the point is , i read it more than 4 times , i really love this , the description is perfect .. and i really adore the style you write .
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Thank you so much. You don't know how much it means to her.
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i like music and art too , in fact im really artistic , although i dont have a good gallery and i dont really draw well 
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It takes more than technique and skill to be a great artist. Being artistic is much more important. 8)
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yeah i guess you re right ..
so .. i really really like "rain"... really..
did you write this because you wanted to express your emotion ? or something else?
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I write everything I write to express emotion. 8)
It's also because I just did what the "she" in the poem did shortly before writing it. It was relieving after having a major disappointment earlier today.
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well , the dissapointment is really good expresed there
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