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Published: 2020-12-11 03:04:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 306; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description This here is the first deleted page of the series so far!

Description: This is the original introduction to Vincent, and his old model

Reason for removal: The reason being that I've accidentally overwritten the original introduction with the following page. But when I attempt to refix that page, I personally thing that his introduction felt to unexpected and personally, his introduction doesn't match his devious and sly personality . Another reason is that I don't like his old design, thinking his hair looks to weird and off-putting, and that his face looks less of my character drawing style. So i tinkered with his head a bit more, and did a few little extras on his clothes, and that's how we got the Vincent we know so far...

Bonus fact: The empty bottom panel is going to have first person pan shot of Vince saying "Read for another year of beating, derp?" with a vulture like monster behind him. But I didn't save the page, and when reloading it, that final pan wasn't there, another reasoning for this page being deleted.

Bonus fact 2: The original page 31 is going to be an extent of the final pan on page 30, with the gang trying to stand up for Justin, but were intimidator by Vincent's vulture like monster. And that page 31 would be shoved to page 32. But with the redesign of the page, I kind of shortened that short stand off to a single pan, reflecting Justin's and Vincent's checkered predator an prey relationship.

Bonus fact 3: Vincent's monster was originally a Vulture monster called Scavulterror. But this falls into Cliché with the bully character having  companion being more scarier looking, but being dumb at the same time. So I use another monster, Shockodile, and use their teamwork as a Jock type. Another stereotypical cliché, but it works better for their relationship, and how their personalities being reflected on each other, making them both being egotistical.
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