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Collateral-Damage666 — I Broke My Promise:I Love You
Published: 2011-03-23 04:17:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1069; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 3
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Description I promised myself.
[I broke my promise.]
I never thought I'd meet someone like you.
[Someone who cared for me.]
You showed me friendship.
[You taught me trust.]
You reminded me how to laugh.
[I had forgotten how.]
You gave me a shoulder to cry on.
[I finally shed those endless tears.]
When I shivered in fright, you would hold me.
[When I'm with you, I'm not as scared.]
You were always there for me no matter what.
[I've come to love you.]
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Comments: 29

SAD-FTV [2016-07-25 10:54:29 +0000 UTC]

      

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killingursoulXx [2011-03-26 10:03:15 +0000 UTC]

this is great, it really captures how love develops and like every one else ii also love the way its broken up

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to killingursoulXx [2011-03-26 15:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Mai-Taniyama-anime [2011-03-25 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.
i especialy like the bit where it says:
You gave me a shoulder to cry on.

[I finally shed those endless tears.]

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to Mai-Taniyama-anime [2011-03-25 20:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Mai-Taniyama-anime In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-25 22:28:43 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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TypicalTAzn [2011-03-23 21:48:07 +0000 UTC]

....D: Yes I shed those endless tears because of him. Because of him I smiles, but now I look back, I cannot smile at all. Cause I knew there was always something special about him, but I had to transfer school....... T x T

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to TypicalTAzn [2011-03-23 23:37:55 +0000 UTC]

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midnightstorm45044 [2011-03-23 20:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Dawwww.
I still love this style of writing x3

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to midnightstorm45044 [2011-03-23 23:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. Same here.

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LollipopRawr [2011-03-23 20:26:34 +0000 UTC]

i love how you broke it up (:
and how you say what you say C:

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to LollipopRawr [2011-03-23 23:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
How I say what I say?

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LollipopRawr In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-26 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i dont know its different from im used to seeing/reading and things and its a good different. but that may just be me haha ^^'

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to LollipopRawr [2011-03-26 22:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LollipopRawr In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-26 22:23:08 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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PiscesPassion [2011-03-23 18:19:12 +0000 UTC]

wow i lik how you would lik the peices to the stanza beforee it in brackets. That makes it more in depth (well for me) i lik this poem! lol

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to PiscesPassion [2011-03-23 23:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PiscesPassion In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-23 23:41:18 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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saevuswinds [2011-03-23 10:09:54 +0000 UTC]

The way you wrote this poem not only leaves me wondering, but also thiking about how beautiful love can be. The way you break it up is gorgeous. Great job!!!

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to saevuswinds [2011-03-23 23:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!
Thanks for all the kind comments!

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saevuswinds In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-26 06:39:05 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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deadtothaworld [2011-03-23 04:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Zomg I luvz it

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to deadtothaworld [2011-03-23 04:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Raielah [2011-03-23 04:23:48 +0000 UTC]

I love how you break you poems up, it makes them much more interesting ^.^

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to Raielah [2011-03-23 04:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I like experimenting with the html coding and seeing what I get.

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Raielah In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-23 04:24:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^.^ I need to try that too

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to Raielah [2011-03-23 04:25:26 +0000 UTC]

You should! It's quite fun.

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Raielah In reply to Collateral-Damage666 [2011-03-23 04:26:30 +0000 UTC]

haha I will

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Collateral-Damage666 In reply to Raielah [2011-03-23 04:26:47 +0000 UTC]

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