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Published: 2005-04-20 06:08:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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Umm... I got problems with my anatomy or something like that... Could you pretty please help me??? PLEASE.... I'll appreciate all your constructive critiques...Thanks for the comments in advance!
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ala naman pong problem sa anatomy... onting adjustment lang po dun sa eyes nung lalake... medyo off-set kasi eh... yun lang po!
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HHHMmmmm... Ngayon ko lng napansin yon a..... Thanks!!!
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hhhmm .. um nsabi na to e ... pero sabi mo magcomment ...
- his head is a bit off
- too foggy for me
- lineart missing
other than that ... great job !!
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ok naman cyril ah kaso may napansin lang ako ung outline ng uniform sa babae nawala. pero maganda naman ung sa mukha.
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Aba himala!!! di ka ata nanlait ngayon a!!! Anyway thank you!!!
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hehehe saka nalang pagdating nang panahon. (joke)
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weh? Could you please translate it??? I can't understand...
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Wow thanks!!! I found your artworks good too!!! I'll watch you!!!
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Since..na-coveran po siya ng fog (kaya nga one foggy day ang title- tungaw!) wala na po siyang mali when it comes to anatomy build up or kahit wala yun fog- wala pa rin siyang problema sa anatomy (anu ba itech XD ) advice ko lang is mag-experiment ka pa sa folds and sa hair especially the effects , also try na gumawa ng isang copy ng drawings para sa pag-eexperimentohan mo sa effects XD okies.
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Okies!!! Thanks for the tip!!!
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Wai~
the colors looks nice and the foggy effect gave it some story~
cool!
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ayos ka tol. inaadvertise pa ni raven ung gwa mo. ganda naman ah. mejo parang off lang ung ulo nung guy. (or ako lang un.)
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Thanks tol!!! Pa watch na din ha!!!
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Aba Cyril Oliver Legaspi!
Isa lang ang masasabi ko - yeah. It's foggy. Di lang makita ung ibang outlines, lalo na dun kay Sen. Ok naman si Leanne, kaso nga lang parang pinaghalo mo ung uniform ng MC sa Esma. Un lang po!
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Anatomy? There is nothing really wrong with it.
Don't try to make it look good by fogging it up with clouds, and cutting off the legs. I can't see whats wrong with it. Thats what you do on a final project when you know you can do it. At this point there is nothing wrong with it, you follow all the rules of anime.
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Wow!!! You know a lot!!! Can I drop by in your page sometimes??? I could use some tips with guys like you!!! Thanks!!!
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Um.. er thanks. I don't really know a lot.
I know nothing really. Haven't taken any classes or anything at all, and I'm sure your drawing is better then most of mine. But thanks for the watch. I'll help you out whenever I can. g2g sleep before I die from lack of sleep.
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i see no problems... *not that means anything* i am very impressed with the shading of this work
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It's a little hard to tell because of the fog, but from what I can see, the anatomy looks just fine. ^_^
I like the image too...it has a peaceful yet sad sort of feeling to it.
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Ummm... Thanks!!! I'm happy that you appreciate my work!!! ^^
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