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Theorentheumbrxon [2015-02-01 15:39:00 +0000 UTC]

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This is my first critique so sorry if it sucks lol


I think its very well done ^v^ The style of the tf and how it started was excellent! But I have a small tip, I saw limited transforming going on (only 2 scenes of transforming) So maybe for next time, add some more scenes where the subject is transforming)

Moar positives: You nailed the coloring! The drawings themselves were also very well done! Its also very clear to look at, so that helps me, and surly others to see it and enjoy it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Keep up the great work ^w^ excited to see more!

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Shadowechos [2015-02-04 01:01:21 +0000 UTC]

So kawaii

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LitCamAct [2015-02-01 22:25:15 +0000 UTC]

this is not bad at all :3

some parts are shabby but good enough XD

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Crystal-Ice-Dragonix [2015-02-01 20:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Nice job with the art Solar! Not bad at all... XD

~Saphira

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Theorentheumbrxon [2015-02-01 15:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice work

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Sniddlesss [2015-02-01 12:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Dang! This is well done! ^^

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That-Tiny-Rii [2015-02-01 10:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Very good! May I also request something?

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MagicalTF [2015-02-01 10:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Not bad for a first time~

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Avianine [2015-02-01 10:12:34 +0000 UTC]

XDD saphira eyes on last panel like "i will kill you XP"

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