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comeau — She Reminds Me by-nc-sa
Published: 2007-07-14 04:19:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 403; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description she resides in shallow roads of entertainment
but treats them with disdain, much as I did
a certain disconnection radiates
and her very nature seems to flow a different way

she wears long skirts every day
leaving a trail of
colourful, reserved self-confidence
with every step another smile
and no end in sight; except Friday

she interrupts my writing with a pleasant surprise
one that throws back the clock and stokes a fire inside
but ceases to amaze me

she radiates potential with every inch of her body;
her straight shoulder length red-tinged hair
sends shivers down my spine

oh, how I wish I could appreciate her mystery without being judged!
she's excitable past a point
but is content with everything that comes her way
and I don't understand her;
she looks like a young Uma Thurman
those eyes look straight to my mind but don't have the tenacity to take an interest
and her voice is like none other; dry, caring, immature
and she won't let me in
because she doesn't know I'm knocking
because she's not old enough to notice

she was wearing the sexiest casual loose flowing pants
black; soft on the eyes
she has a taste for the unconventional
and is maturing quicker than the others
there's a mother in her
deep; caring; sensitive
oh why must the courts police my thoughts?

she was in a field when I saw her last
through a car window
maybe I'll see her again on Sunday?
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Comments: 2

dnmph [2007-07-23 12:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Further proof of your amazing writing. Reminds me a bit of Dylan. Schytzophrenic almost... none of it quite clear enough to put to the tip of your tongue, and only alive within the confides of your mind.
But hay, for what it's worth, schytzophrenia can be a good thing right?

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luminescent-rose [2007-07-22 23:19:50 +0000 UTC]

i just think it's amazing how many opinions/thoughts/feelings you can get from someone you hardly know, even if it's a complete stranger.

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