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Published: 2008-05-15 04:07:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2099; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 10
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Description With the new forums [link] and trying to find old posts and such, I didn't have a lot of time to put a 'roper' comic together for today's update... but instead I decided to put up the comic, just in it's sketch stage... before I've inked and coloured it. Basically it's the real comic, stripped down a few layers.

The prologue for the next story arc...
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Comments: 19

Starath [2008-05-15 19:58:02 +0000 UTC]

I like seeing your sketches. it gives me an idea on how you structure your TF drawings cuz I have such a horrible time starting out with my own TFs.

Can't wait to see what's coming!

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Comics-in-Disguise In reply to Starath [2008-05-16 04:56:01 +0000 UTC]

when in doubt, start with shapes. They're kind of awkward in places (different from human structure I should say) so sometimes I need to sketch out the whole body before adding in any details. Prowl actually comes very close to a human body type, I find him a lot easier than some others to draw.

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Starath In reply to Comics-in-Disguise [2008-05-16 14:39:54 +0000 UTC]

I do attempt to start with shapes, but with all the angles a TF has, my bots usually come out looking weird and improportional (is that a word? ) cuz of perspective inconsistencies. Do you use any vanishing points or do you just go for it?

Granted I need practice. It's just that starting a TF pic is so freaking frustrating.

Also, cuz you're awesome.

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Comics-in-Disguise In reply to Starath [2008-05-19 05:41:02 +0000 UTC]


...I'm not the best person to talk to about perspective.. lol you probably should be conscious of that but I always sort of go on the fly...
The TF are quite boxy, you might want to try just different squares/cubes as a starting point, it could help

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Starath In reply to Comics-in-Disguise [2008-05-19 13:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Okie, thank you.

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Jeysie [2008-05-15 16:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Hooray for Perceptor! Busy doing the sciency problem-solving he does best... and thank you for not making him sound like he ate a dictionary.

I like your sketched strips... they kind of have an interesting style all their own. (Plus your sketches are still nicer-looking than my finished art... heh.)

Poor Autobots... having a Decepticon raiding party coming at them headed up by Devastator... what will they do?

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Comics-in-Disguise In reply to Jeysie [2008-05-16 04:56:38 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking hard on Perceptor's dialogue, then decided simplicity was a good route for a more simple comic.
Babbling might've ruined the mood, I find it's used mostly for comedic effect.

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Jeysie In reply to Comics-in-Disguise [2008-05-16 05:09:10 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind Perceptor babbling so much... though I agree it'd be out of place here.

Just that "nerdspeak" is hard to get right... and most people don't, overdoing it greatly instead. (Even the old Marvel writers got it wrong, to the point where I can't stand Marvel Perceptor. ) So I greatly appreciate it when writers *don't* go overboard.

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Apple-Dee [2008-05-15 13:36:01 +0000 UTC]

Yey! I'm so happy you've put Prowl in this one... ^^
I can't wait to see more!

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Yondercat [2008-05-15 12:24:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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Henniarox In reply to Yondercat [2008-05-15 21:14:25 +0000 UTC]

I love your signature I won't steal Thundercracker if you don't steal Jackie!!

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Yondercat In reply to Henniarox [2008-05-15 21:56:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks. Jackie? o_O you mean Jackie Chan?

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Henniarox In reply to Yondercat [2008-05-15 22:44:54 +0000 UTC]

no!!
Wheeljack

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Yondercat In reply to Henniarox [2008-05-15 23:50:25 +0000 UTC]

oooh! ok! I won't tkae him away but I know theres others out there, that really love him

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Henniarox In reply to Yondercat [2008-05-16 00:25:01 +0000 UTC]

ya *sniff*

I don't think I have much of a chance

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Yondercat In reply to Henniarox [2008-05-16 12:32:15 +0000 UTC]

lol I probably don't have much of a chance with THundercracker either but I won't go down without a FIGHT!

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Henniarox In reply to Yondercat [2008-05-16 14:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Your right why should I just give up

Who wants to fight me

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Yondercat In reply to Henniarox [2008-05-16 14:49:50 +0000 UTC]

there ya go! look out for us! We're on the prowl..

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Comics-in-Disguise In reply to Henniarox [2008-05-16 04:57:27 +0000 UTC]

COURAGE!!!

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