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ContagiousPixie — I'm searching for you
Published: 2009-10-20 00:56:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 3
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Description My buttery fingers can't catch you
                       Every brief moment I feel as though I've finally got a hold of you
                                     You slip through...

                                                                        Don't you understand that I need you?
                                         Can't you find it in you to help me out?
       So I'm not always the one attempting to come together?

Sometimes it feels like you aren't even trying...
{maybe I'm the only one that desperately needs love}

But if you're meant to be mine couldn't you please put some effort into it?

My arms are losing strength
I feel as though there's no point in trying anymore.

                                                                  Hurry before I give up.
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Comments: 8

ErebusHyperion [2010-04-19 18:43:49 +0000 UTC]

oops I meant to paste all three lines:
"My buttery fingers can't catch you
Every brief moment I feel as though I've finally got a hold of you
You slip through..."

so yah...insert that up there haha...sorry I'm leaving so many comments

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ErebusHyperion [2010-04-19 18:39:25 +0000 UTC]

I know this is my second comment on here...but oh well lol

"My buttery fingers can't catch you"
that is obviously an amazing line, makes me think way too much...keep that up :]

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ContagiousPixie In reply to ErebusHyperion [2010-04-20 01:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, well, double whammy.
Thank-you!

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ErebusHyperion [2010-04-14 03:15:27 +0000 UTC]

OoO I love this

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ContagiousPixie In reply to ErebusHyperion [2010-04-14 03:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you very much!

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flawedfairytale [2009-11-02 21:01:47 +0000 UTC]

When I first read this I thought I'd seen 'butterfly fingers,' which created an odd softness to the rest of the piece. Reading it through as I should- (reading it properly, that is!) it's so beautifully written.

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ContagiousPixie In reply to flawedfairytale [2009-11-03 00:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!
When I read the comments you give to me it helps me feel less hopeless in my writing. lol

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flawedfairytale In reply to ContagiousPixie [2009-11-03 08:12:04 +0000 UTC]

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