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WritingRin [2020-08-01 01:33:14 +0000 UTC]
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KKagome [2015-08-21 03:16:58 +0000 UTC]
i love those fanfics and this is beautiful
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SoulSilverHeartGold [2012-04-12 22:31:02 +0000 UTC]
The lineart for this piece is spectacular. So clean and smooth. I love Sesshy's hair!
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KatChan00 [2011-11-03 15:46:49 +0000 UTC]
This is mind-blowingly gorgeous, but I do have one question... isn't Kagome helping him in LC because he's missing his left arm still?
That aside, The way you've drawn both of them is so lovely. I love his fluff in particular, the stylized look you've used looks amazing. Their hair, clothes, faces, shadows... everything is so beautiful!
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CookieAsylum In reply to KatChan00 [2011-11-03 16:16:05 +0000 UTC]
True. Hence why the piece is only "inspired", not a direct fanart of the story. Personally, I love that Sesshoumaru got his arm back (and Bakusaiga, mostly). But I've been wanting to draw Kagome and Sesshoumaru together for awhile anyways, and "Lord Charming" is such a cute story that the title just seemed right for the piece.
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CookieAsylum In reply to KatChan00 [2011-11-03 17:45:50 +0000 UTC]
lol No, it's okay. Thank you for stopping by to look at it. And Forth writes beautifully.
I'd like to do a few more literal pieces actually based on chapters from "Lord Charming". We'll see. <3
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CookieAsylum In reply to ilithyahime [2011-11-03 16:23:16 +0000 UTC]
No, it's quite okay. I love to get critique.
I didn't shade her eyes, but I do kind of understand what you mean. I did a semi-fill hatching on her pupils (the irises aren't colored in), and that might be what is weird. Plus, I inked this traditionally, so the lines had to be darkened to make them more readable. I can go back in and clean away some of the underlying pencil marks and see if that clears it up.
But as far as the differing eye shape between the characters, that was intentional. To me, Sesshoumaru comes off as this cool, somewhat indifferent character who doesn't necessarily lack expression, but is careful with how he portrays himself. Hence why his eyes are narrower and much more... predator-like. Kagome puts me in the mind of an expressive character who loves wholeheartedly and truly, so I made her eyes larger and more expressive. Just to show the dynamic between the two characters. However, if that's not being conveyed, let me know and I'll do what I can to fix it.
Thank you. <3
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Satsuki-fujin [2011-11-02 17:43:06 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! And I love Lord Charming, it's so much fun. XD
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Kessira26 [2011-11-02 16:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Sessy looks amazing here!
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TamaRose [2011-11-02 03:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's all great except Kagome's face.Other then that it's awesome. Also, I love the story as well. I am glad someone drew a picture for it.
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CookieAsylum In reply to TamaRose [2011-11-02 04:07:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Actually, I just changed the file to the newer, fixed version. I shifted Kagome's eyes farther apart. Let me know if it looks better? It'd be nice to see if the change worked. <3
And yes, I like the story too. I always look forward to Forthright's updates. : D
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KrysOfSorrow [2011-11-02 02:30:58 +0000 UTC]
Sesshomaru's done nicely... but Kagome's eyes are a smidge too close together.
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CookieAsylum In reply to KrysOfSorrow [2011-11-02 02:57:51 +0000 UTC]
lol Yeah, I noticed that too. I'll see what I can do.
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LadyShard [2011-11-02 01:42:52 +0000 UTC]
Very clean lines, and adorable expressions...love it!
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