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CoolBlack009 — Retrieval (Teaser 4)
Published: 2020-03-11 22:01:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 11571; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 14
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After taking a couple of breathes to calm herself, Alex started to recite what happened and what see saw. She cautiously looked at and fingered her belly button, ensuring that nothing was there that didn't belong.Related content
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I really like this sequence, but just wanted to say the text on this page is pretty hard to read. The blue glow around the letters kind of muddies them a bit, makes them not stand out as much.
You might want to try a blue drop shadow instead, or just tone down the glow a little, especially for a page like this where the font size is smaller.
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