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AspiredWriter [2015-03-10 05:07:22 +0000 UTC]
very interesting work.
couple of things that bother me however:
1. things feel out of place. not because you threw strange things in strange places (which i surmised was the point) but because they don't have any effect. they feel like they're not really there. no shadowing or disturbances or anything.
2. maybe also is a cause of the first point: sizing. the sizing of the elements gives the picture a "fakey" feel for instance, things seem smaller as they are further away which means that those penguins are sizably larger than that lion (scary penguins) and that girl is bigger than those orchas and the lion too.
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