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Published: 2014-02-21 03:57:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 684; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 4
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Commission for Racer of Wild Equines Version 3 of her stallion Theo. I really hope she likes how it turned out because I really like this one! SO MUCH FREAKING HAIR omg that took forever, but I think it looks good? I hate the stupid rose c.c
Thanks always to the lovely stock providers!
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This is a beautiful piece, so please don't be discouraged by the low ratings.
There's just a few places/ nitpicky things that I'd like to point out..
The major one is the rose. The horse matches the orangy glow of the bg but the rose does not, it just looks like you cut it out, brightened it and you were done.. The rose should have an orange hue to it.
Also the horse's left ear is cut strangely, It looks like it should be fuzzy but it's cut very straight with sharp edges.
The top of the horse's head and rump should be illuminated more because the light source is so strong. Also there's should be a white outliney glow around the eye and even around the legs some because of the lighting.
The grounding looks like you took a soft fuzzy eraser brush on a lower opacity? I'd suggest downloading plant brushes and erasing using though so the plants around the legs look sharp and clear not fuzzy and blurry.
The background itself is very nice beautiful... and overall a very beauatiful piece
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(Wow I was actually shocked to get a critique! I've never gotten any before! lol)
Yea the rose (as I stated in my comments) I didn't care for. I simply gave up on it because when I added the orange tint, it turned pixelated, and I couldn't find a rose to match it. I was actually thinking about editing it today since it was so late last night <3
I didn't even notice the ear o.o I'll have to go edit that. As well as the horses lighting.
As for the feet, they are supposed to look somewhat like that? I was trying to make them look like they were disappearing through the grass but at the same time still visible P= lol
Thank you so much for the critique tho!
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Use photo filters if you have ps perhaps? You're going to have to give up some of the red hue for a more orange hue to get it orangy so it'll look more like an orange rose unfortunately.
yeah, I know you wanted to still see the feet, but grass isn't fuzzy, so by erasing them with soft eraser you give them a 'fuzzy look' but if you erase with grass brushes you get crisp lines and still see the feet peaking through
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Your manes and tails are getting so much better. O:
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Thank you love <3 !
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Yep! I'm sorry I can't give you a decent comment: you're way better than me at images! You probably know more of what you need to improve on than I do. XD
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Ah I love your comments! =] It makes me feel special! haha haha and it helps when I get good critique like Summer gave me <3
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well yous is welcome. (:
hopefully you can get some more critique on other manips you make, i know they're a big help when you want to improve. i used to ask fishie, she helped me all the time XD
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I am hoping to get better. I've had a lot of good critique from a lot of awesome people lately <3 I just need to work on it haha
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Yep, you'll improve all the time, just do the work! ;3
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