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CorvusRaven β Marcus shakes Untoten
Published: 2012-04-22 00:15:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 607; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 10
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I decided to animate a section of my opponents entry, where Untoten is slaughtered by Marcus, check it out: [link]Critiques on timing and stuff are appreciated
Wow such a creative title I know.
I am so nervous ;A;
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I think it's neat you animated a scene from your opponent's round. Animation looks really fluid too!
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Thanks
I also want to do some fanart of some of the literature entrys, but with finals, I probably won't get around to it before the next round starts
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noooooo!!!! Untoten! 
THe one thing that bothers me is the frame when untoten is on the left and her legs very suddenly jerk downwards and then go up again. It would be better if that had another inbetween frame somewhere along there to make it seem less sudden.
for the timing it feels like there is tom much waiting at the sides. At the moment it has a Tick-Tock timing to it. when what would look beter is a continuios movment.
Hopefully that makes sense?
But youve definatly done a fantastic job with the angles of the faces and of course untotens face!!! XD
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Thank you for the critique! yeah maybe it was too much for the amount of momentum. I wouldn't want to add another frame there because I think it would hold there for too long. And I agree, maybe I should have kept the head moving even slightly near the ends. thanks C:
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Shake, shake, shake, SeΓ±ora, shake your body line,
Shake, shake, shake, SeΓ±ora, shake it all the time!
Ahem. Sorry.
Poor Untoten.
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I just saw round four posted. Untoten lives! Yay!
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I'm glad I get to make it to the next round
Yay Drake lives too! xD
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And spared those feral dogs some really bad gas I'm sure.
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Lol yes, most likely
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I have to ask, in many panels I see Marcus with three legs and in other panels her has four.... Is he magic?
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Nope, he has 4 legs in every frame
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[link] I mean this, when it starts he only has three legs
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Yeah I wonder about that too xD
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Nope, I double checked it frame by frame and she has four legs in all of them. She is missing her tail in a few frames though
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NO I saw she had all her legs, Im just asking about other artwork.
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She makes her flesh invisible sometimes
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Oh now i understand
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