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Description OFFICIAL STORY HERE  Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they Origins of Light and Fire - Chapter 1
 An eerie echo crept through the halls of the Cornerian Orbital Gate. Even during the busiest hour of the day, the crew felt uneasy going about their everyday duties. As Beltino Toad, the facility's Research Director, shuffled down to the research lab, he received a chill up his spine. The small toad stopped for a moment, looking around at the personnel carrying on with their duties, trying to see if they shivered just as he did. He stood in the middle of the hall for a moment, eyeing up each of the crew that passed by. Everyone was focused on their duties, but he could tell they felt anxious.
 Beltino continued his way down to the research lab. Just the day before, a research team working on Fichina reported some abnormal activity a few kilometers away from the base. When the research team reported back, they requested immediate and urgent assistance. Beltino, followed by a few soldiers, were sent to investigate the findings.
 When the team had arrived to the site, they
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Comments: 12

Shadow-Monger [2014-04-03 02:26:36 +0000 UTC]

This is the first chance I have had to continue where I left off. I know that this is the old one; but I am going to finish this. I find it interesting how you describe her telekinetic abilities. As a fellow writer I know how hard it can be to discern between speech and thought-speech.

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PinkCowgirl925 [2012-02-07 22:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! i think you might have missed a word or two but i got what you meant

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Cosmic-Phoenyx In reply to PinkCowgirl925 [2012-02-08 01:06:31 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks!! do you mind showing me where I missed??

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PinkCowgirl925 In reply to Cosmic-Phoenyx [2012-02-08 01:31:11 +0000 UTC]

“Yeah I suppose your right Mr.Lombardi.” I think you meant you're.


“Do you know who the HELL your talking to?! Your talking to a commanding officer and I" another You're thing (im normally this hardcore grammar)


there is another but i lost it.

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Cosmic-Phoenyx In reply to PinkCowgirl925 [2012-02-08 03:52:44 +0000 UTC]

ooh yeah truee! Thanks

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PinkCowgirl925 In reply to PinkCowgirl925 [2012-02-08 03:41:36 +0000 UTC]

. “Hey Nova, do you have a moment
to talk?” She asks softly. I smile sure thing Krystal, please take a seat anywhere.... you missed some " "

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PinkCowgirl925 In reply to PinkCowgirl925 [2012-02-08 03:43:05 +0000 UTC]

“Krystal you
need to worry yourself about my love life.” I think you meant you need not to worry yourself

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KestrelRaptor [2012-02-07 12:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome!

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Cosmic-Phoenyx In reply to KestrelRaptor [2012-02-08 01:05:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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KestrelRaptor In reply to Cosmic-Phoenyx [2012-02-08 09:50:42 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Noe-Izumi [2012-02-07 09:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Contiiiiinue!
Love the fight part, so Falco-ish

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Cosmic-Phoenyx In reply to Noe-Izumi [2012-02-08 01:06:01 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks!! I really appreciate the support!! and me too actually, it helped me bring out Nova's character & its funny!

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