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CosmlcPunk — Isolated Skies.

Published: 2013-07-03 12:59:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 708; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 0
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Description I sit there, as the clouds cradle me.
He glances and glares, so sympathetically.
''Don't be afraid. Don't be alarmed''
He smiles graciously, holding out his arms.

He's been hurt, he's been wounded but still he smiles.
He speaks with elegance, so softly even though he's died.
I lift an eyebrow, in confusion to why he's so cool.
But his smile was still as bright as the crescent moon.

As I watched him beam in the open darkness.
He approached me so steadily and avoided my madness.
He nodded at me, and lifted his hand and placed it by my chest.
He looked at the three indents and put my pain to rest.

The star studded sky, looked down in endorsement.
The lights dimly glowed from anticipation from a distant.
His cloak swished and swayed and danced with the wind.
He let go of me, and I watched him whisk away as he fades.

A song echoes through the tune of the silent night.
''You don't belong here yet, dancestor. Live and fight.''
''I'll always be with you, wherever you'll go.''
''Make this world at peace, for me, once more.''

The clouds quietened down, and it was all hushed.
I woke up on the ground, and felt my heartbeat rush.
I knew what I had to do, for the importance of this game.
The Signless gave me life, and now I'm back again.




That poem took longer than expected.
No wonder why I failed (am going to) at English.
I got stuck on what to rhyme with moon, omg XD

Sadstuck for the update (only now I found out he didn't die.)
Karkat is seated on top of the cliff, in the star lit landscape.
Signless decided to let him live but he just wanted to talk with his dancestor.

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wildewriter99 [2014-02-24 14:55:04 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool! The background especially is beautiful :3 . P.S. Your poem wasn't too bad either .

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CosmlcPunk In reply to wildewriter99 [2014-02-24 16:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the kind comments and my poetry skills aren't that great xD but thanks anyway c:

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wildewriter99 In reply to CosmlcPunk [2014-02-24 19:54:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Glomp-me-and-die [2013-07-16 15:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm sad. >< But good work~!

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CosmlcPunk In reply to Glomp-me-and-die [2013-07-16 16:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww, I'm sorry *shooshpaps* thank you though e.e

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religiouscornrose237 [2013-07-05 16:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...that's pretty heavy stuff. qnq nice.

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CosmlcPunk In reply to religiouscornrose237 [2013-07-05 19:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, thanks

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religiouscornrose237 In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-08 02:09:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. owo

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5UNNYR4Y3 [2013-07-04 15:21:46 +0000 UTC]

ooooow, my heart!
I love the idea of "first meetings" between characters. This one, though...so many feels.
I like your poem ^.^

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CosmlcPunk In reply to 5UNNYR4Y3 [2013-07-04 16:04:20 +0000 UTC]

I would have written more on the whole idea of the drawing but I thought my poem took enough room up. And thanks ^^ I'm not very good at poetry but at least I attempted it xD

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SEVMD [2013-07-04 13:25:30 +0000 UTC]

...I feel like you ripped my heart apart... Even thought karkat came back to life

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-04 13:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Awww, I'm sorry. I've never had that affect on someone with my work before *paps*
Yes Karkat came back to life ! but I was saddened when I thought he had died too :3

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-04 13:58:22 +0000 UTC]

Yea but that would mean that Karkat won't have a second chance of being revived, Jane can only revive the person once right?

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-04 14:22:35 +0000 UTC]

I guess you're right, Hussie has his ways though :l

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-04 14:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh if he kills karkat again I swear, I'm pretty sure the whole homestuck fandom will explode

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-04 15:19:16 +0000 UTC]

I know, but when I thought Karkat had actually died in the comic people were writing ''Good. I'm glad he's gone'' I just wanted to give them a swift kick up the ass owo

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-04 15:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Karkat has played a very important role in the whole story if he wasn't even created who knows how this story would have played out! Karkat's past and many actions he did led most of the things happen until now, including the roles of other characters. Jegus don't just trash the troll just because he is rude or that hussie favoured him.

I think karkat is a cute nubby troll that I would probably cuddle with him if he does not attack me for touching him ouo

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-04 15:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he is an important character but I liked him more anyway before I knew he was my patron troll. Yeah most of the plot in the story was unfolded by him by the self memos etc.

I don't think he's rude, just has a hard shell (crab pun xD) and basically he hides his softer character. He's not that aggressive or angry if you think about it. o-o

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-05 01:52:07 +0000 UTC]

He is my sign and gamzee is my patron >> de javu
You got to admit, karkat usually does the first move before everything else starts moving. if you exclude the kids.

XD isn't that just like crabs? hard outside and sift inside. Well, thats what knights are. From what I know, knights always put a facade when they are really something else. Thats actually like dave and karkat

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-05 06:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Well, Karkat's my sign but apparently my patron is Terezi (I have no idea, I don't even act like her at all o_o) Yeah, Karkat is the one who introduces things and gets Act 5 flowing with the whole red/blue teams and yea o.o

Yeah, I' sorta like that o-o maybe idk
and yea you have a point lol xD

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-05 07:14:13 +0000 UTC]

XD terezi is probably more like a helper, you might have a friend like terezi. If karkat wasn't the leader, things might have gone very differently :/ I just wish hussie would stop updating sporadically D: Its putting me on edge

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-05 12:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Terezi has always been more of a side-kick than anything o-o
Yeah, Karkat was basically the one who kept the pace of the trolls plot running smoothly. I still need to get to the update seeming my friends usually tell me what happens (I have like 500 pages to read and I'm at the update so I'm not that far behind.) It's just when my friend told me that Karkat died I felt like creating a sadstuck owo

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SEVMD In reply to CosmlcPunk [2013-07-05 13:27:27 +0000 UTC]

sadstuck makes me very very sad QAQ

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CosmlcPunk In reply to SEVMD [2013-07-05 13:39:08 +0000 UTC]

I know right D:
then it makes me even sadder that I can't draw like that even if I tried xD

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