Comments: 20
Milki-Moon [2018-05-25 19:49:07 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, the story in this progresses really good~ Also the use of color in the lighting is just...
I really miss the WIPs you posted of it in the discord server though-
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CoughingFish In reply to Milki-Moon [2018-05-25 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
and i miss posting them there too but i've been in a bad mood for a while which is why i left :'3
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Milki-Moon In reply to CoughingFish [2018-05-25 20:15:31 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
I'm super sorry to hear and hope you feel better soon! If you decide to come back, it's always a pleasure to have you there! ^^
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CoughingFish In reply to Milki-Moon [2018-05-26 21:52:40 +0000 UTC]
I honestly don't know if i even can join again, me and traven haven't been talking a lot lately and idk if she hates me or not.
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Milki-Moon In reply to CoughingFish [2018-05-26 22:16:11 +0000 UTC]
It's probably not the case or she would have said something about it? D: She was inactive in the server as well so maybe she is busy with life or something.
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CoughingFish In reply to Milki-Moon [2018-05-26 22:45:30 +0000 UTC]
maybe but it feels like i might be annoying her because I basically have to start every conversation and only get small replies? I don't know im probably just being dramatic and clingy
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Fizzy-Sweets [2018-05-25 17:45:56 +0000 UTC]
oooooooooo
This is a really nice painting style
The story seems really interesting so far tooo
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Rainqu [2018-05-25 01:47:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if it technically counts as a grammar mistake, but you said that they "kept" peace, not created, so maybe it would work a little better if you replaced "created" in the last panel with "preserved"?
Also, this comic is great so far! :0 idk but I love your style sm,
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CoughingFish In reply to Rainqu [2018-05-25 01:51:51 +0000 UTC]
ooo thanks!
I'm very bad at wording things so i really appreciate the advice!
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Rainqu In reply to CoughingFish [2018-05-25 02:05:58 +0000 UTC]
oh, and I recommend adding "there" to the very first sentence,
so it flows from "long ago.." to "there lived a lady and a lord"
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Rainqu In reply to CoughingFish [2018-05-25 01:53:22 +0000 UTC]
np! And don't worry, it's a lot better than I've heard from others ;>
actually you might be a little better at it than me and it's my native language lol
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C0ffeeBeann [2018-05-25 01:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Aaa I love this story so far! It's so good!
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CoughingFish [2018-05-25 01:44:20 +0000 UTC]
If there are any grammar mistakes please notify me asap so they can be fixed!
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