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CoughingFish — Above The Shadows- Chapter 0- Page 6
Published: 2018-05-25 01:43:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 334; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Amazing, the story in this progresses really good~ Also the use of color in the lighting is just...
I really miss the WIPs you posted of it in the discord server though-
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Thanks
and i miss posting them there too but i've been in a bad mood for a while which is why i left :'3
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You're welcome!
I'm super sorry to hear and hope you feel better soon! If you decide to come back, it's always a pleasure to have you there! ^^
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I honestly don't know if i even can join again, me and traven haven't been talking a lot lately and idk if she hates me or not.
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It's probably not the case or she would have said something about it? D: She was inactive in the server as well so maybe she is busy with life or something.
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maybe but it feels like i might be annoying her because I basically have to start every conversation and only get small replies? I don't know im probably just being dramatic and clingy
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Actually I have a friend I care for a lot but he is always the one starting a conversation because I don't really like doing it if I have nothing to talk about..But I do enjoy his company and stuff when we start to talk. I mean if you guys used to both talk a lot and suddenly she just doesn't seem very active, there's nothing wrong with asking if you're being a bother or something. 
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oooooooooo
This is a really nice painting style
The story seems really interesting so far tooo
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Ooh I love the story so far! And beautiful art as always
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I don't know if it technically counts as a grammar mistake, but you said that they "kept" peace, not created, so maybe it would work a little better if you replaced "created" in the last panel with "preserved"?
Also, this comic is great so far! :0 idk but I love your style sm,
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ooo thanks!
I'm very bad at wording things so i really appreciate the advice!
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oh, and I recommend adding "there" to the very first sentence,
so it flows from "long ago.." to "there lived a lady and a lord"
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np! And don't worry, it's a lot better than I've heard from others ;>
actually you might be a little better at it than me and it's my native language lol
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If there are any grammar mistakes please notify me asap so they can be fixed!
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