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coulombic — Another from Goblin Valley, II

Published: 2009-09-30 02:43:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 600; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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djohn9 [2009-09-30 14:45:53 +0000 UTC]

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If I had not been to Goblin Valley I don't think I'd be qualified to critique this. You've captured both the forces shaping the southwest. The wind and the water. Wind and to a lesser extent water formed the Goblins and effects of the water can be seen in the foreground. The detail of the curling mud is very crisp and the overall black and white tones are excellent. The repititive pattern in the dried mud leads off to the left and diminishes in size which gives good depth to the picture. It was probably unintended but the lighter band of mud going across the center enhances the darker cracks in the foreground and the Goblins in the background. Finally, although the foreground might appear rough to some, I see smoothness in the foregroung and roughness in the background. Great shot!

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coulombic In reply to djohn9 [2009-09-30 21:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I find your critique very thoughtful and accurate. Much appreciated.

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djohn9 In reply to coulombic [2009-09-30 22:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Writing a critique is almost as intimidating as posting pictures. I'm still not 100% sure what is meant by "vision"

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theblueberrybush [2011-01-11 19:18:38 +0000 UTC]

beautifull! great comp

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CrystalEnceladus [2009-10-01 09:14:25 +0000 UTC]

OK, I really must go there. You must have taken a while to get the right angle, it gives the impression you're looking down, and yet up. Does that make sense?

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benjamin-charles [2009-09-30 20:53:07 +0000 UTC]

Great Goblin Valley shot, I really need to get back there.

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lostknightkg [2009-09-30 02:59:36 +0000 UTC]

This one is my fav out the lot, the textures and b/w choice makes it surreal.

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