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Published: 2012-01-25 20:57:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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livelyblueyes [2012-01-27 00:57:22 +0000 UTC]

Counry- so far it has a very blurred appearance to it. The mountains in the back where you have started shading need a lot more detail. Try going in super tiny to get the texture in for the rockiness or sandy whichever way you are going with it as I am not sure yet. The brush line in front of needs a wider range of colors as well. Currently they appear a bit washed out. Even though they are far away be sure to get in tiny to get that detail in to avoid the washed out look. I will be honest I do tend to wait until more is done on a picture before critiquing so that I know exactly which direction they are going in.
I think you have an excellent start but you need to get more detail into it.

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patchesofheaven74 [2012-01-25 21:18:51 +0000 UTC]

I think that the back mountains need some of a different hue..like a blue or purple, to make it more stand offish
also the bushes/tree line seems a bit odd i'm not sure if it needs a tad highlighting with a brighter yellow/green, or if it needs some blue/green near the bottom parts of the line..

that's all i can see so far

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