livelyblueyes [2012-01-27 00:57:22 +0000 UTC]
Counry- so far it has a very blurred appearance to it. The mountains in the back where you have started shading need a lot more detail. Try going in super tiny to get the texture in for the rockiness or sandy whichever way you are going with it as I am not sure yet. The brush line in front of needs a wider range of colors as well. Currently they appear a bit washed out. Even though they are far away be sure to get in tiny to get that detail in to avoid the washed out look. I will be honest I do tend to wait until more is done on a picture before critiquing so that I know exactly which direction they are going in.
I think you have an excellent start but you need to get more detail into it.
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