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Hokova [2015-01-25 17:52:07 +0000 UTC]
Dude... you cann this bad writing? I haven't read anything so enjoyable and entertaining in a while.
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SpiritZodiac [2014-12-12 22:19:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm into writing myself and I see a LOT of room for improvement in this. What I usually do is go over what I wrote and see what sounds wrong to me, how I can re-phrase a sentence or which words should be changed or cut out completely. (I've kinda been doing that while I read this, sorry)
Other then that, Great story! Especially your male characters. Think I might write a poem about it. ~thumbs up~
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Crooked-Cosmonaut [2014-10-22 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* I wanna get back into this...
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Vulpine-Poltergeist [2014-10-12 15:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh god.
I remember, two years ago, my friend showing me this.
All we did was fangirl.
I think it's time for a reread. <3
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QueenCaffeine27 [2014-06-30 03:44:37 +0000 UTC]
I really love the concept of this story and your art is fantastic. Normally, I ignore stories that are poorly written but the concept is so intriguing to me, I'll push through to the newer chapters.
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NAMZIZI [2014-04-21 17:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Bad writing? BAD WRITING?! are you kidding me I'm 14 and I can't even write this good.
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Gingersanps [2014-03-29 18:25:20 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. Even if it was writing for another time ... believe me, as a writer, I totally understand. I've spent many days reading cringe-worthy stories that I had written in the past.
I'm definitely going to read the rest of the story.
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QueenCaffeine27 In reply to DawnStarLightning [2014-06-30 03:42:44 +0000 UTC]
My friend tells me it's not actually finished, just that it hasn't been updated in a long time. I don't know if that's true.
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RaccoltoLuna [2014-03-13 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really good so far! I love this kind of writing style, I definitely plan to read the rest of the chapters.
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NeoMidna79 [2013-06-24 04:49:08 +0000 UTC]
No matter how many times I read this, it keeps getting better and better. Love the way the first chapter starts out. I hope the story continues in this life
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Candy-Creep [2012-10-20 21:05:04 +0000 UTC]
This is my third time reading Decemebersville.
HOLY GAWD MAN. It's SO amazing! You're characters are so amazing! I love their personalities so much! (My personal favourite is Tin)
I really have to disagree with your artist comment, I think it's VERY well written even if it does get better later on.
When will you update it? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
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iEnviDevi [2012-08-15 03:34:28 +0000 UTC]
I was rereading this with my brother, and he pointed out Lilbette sounds like little bit, I hadn't even noticed first time 'round. Also, it's raining outsde, so it was timed kind of funny with the thunder in the story. He's really impressed by your writing skills, as am I.
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CountANDRA In reply to iSpazzyKitty [2012-08-15 16:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh whoops, I thought ya meant you read the story already. XDD But wotever, I hope you enjoy the rest. ^^
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bethanyhorvath [2012-08-12 19:14:10 +0000 UTC]
I was griped (amazing)
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Seraphrim [2012-08-07 03:40:00 +0000 UTC]
nice but i couldn't get into it...not descriptive enough, i know you see everything perfectly but i see a page with writing and people talking, the art is so lovely!! OTL i want to see what you see toooooo.......
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CountANDRA In reply to Seraphrim [2012-08-07 04:24:58 +0000 UTC]
Heheheheh~ It's certainly not everyone's cup of tea~ ^^ Sadly, as the artist's comments say, this story is OLD. Very, very, very old; written long ago. And most if not all the chapters are very dialogue-heavy and character-style driven, sooo it's maybe not the swellest thing ever if you are into huge descriptions. C:
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Seraphrim In reply to CountANDRA [2012-08-08 01:36:43 +0000 UTC]
yeah...thx for replying non the less! i love how creative all your characters are! Which is why i wanted to get to know them~~ XD
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ImRandomArtist [2012-08-06 14:03:06 +0000 UTC]
............you know.............this is so similar to something i watched and read as a kid..................just can't remember what...........i mean the art style and story ..............what was it?hmm
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CountANDRA In reply to ImRandomArtist [2012-08-06 16:20:52 +0000 UTC]
As a kid!? Oh my! XD Unless ya ran into a quirky creepy-looking kid in a cemetery near a forest at some point (which I hope you did not for it might have been quite awkward), I do wonder what this was you read! XD
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ImRandomArtist In reply to CountANDRA [2012-08-06 17:13:24 +0000 UTC]
hmmm it was about pale looking family, AH! i remember now, it reminds me of the nightmare before chrimas and the Addams family ^^ and some other thing i can't remember
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CountANDRA In reply to ImRandomArtist [2012-08-06 17:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Addams Family? I LOOOOOOOOOVE the Addams Family. XD
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ImRandomArtist In reply to CountANDRA [2012-08-06 17:16:16 +0000 UTC]
i feel sad now, i remembered i liked it but i can't remember much about it ><
anyways yeah....thats what your story reminds me of style and story, ofc thats just me
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CountANDRA In reply to ImRandomArtist [2012-08-06 17:18:21 +0000 UTC]
You could already tell how is the story just by the first chapter? You're good. xD
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ImRandomArtist In reply to CountANDRA [2012-08-06 17:26:45 +0000 UTC]
actually didn't read it yet lol was busy googling addams family but i will now! looks pretty good
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Chicha-tan24 [2012-08-06 03:20:08 +0000 UTC]
When I read your story and saw the art, I thought it should be made into a film or series c: I really love dark art and a great story to go along with it.
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KodomoKurai [2012-07-29 16:33:47 +0000 UTC]
This is really good! It captured my attention perfectly! and I'm one to be very lazy when it comes to reading. especially online bc i really dislike reading things on a screen instead of paper. So you have accomplished a great achievement!xDlol But yeah. I also, love your artwork! It looks heavily inspired by Tim Burton.^-^
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madhattress1314 [2012-07-24 18:06:10 +0000 UTC]
The cemetery scene reminds me of the scene in the woods in Coraline. Darkslaw seems a bit more mischievious than Wybie though.
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CountANDRA In reply to madhattress1314 [2012-07-24 18:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Any weirdo in a cemetery seems to have that effect on people.
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Hatter-angela [2012-07-03 17:30:05 +0000 UTC]
i love it absoulutelly love love love love it!
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iEnviDevi [2012-06-02 05:44:02 +0000 UTC]
It gets BETTER?It's already so good!
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Secretsister16 [2012-04-17 00:03:41 +0000 UTC]
From what writer to another. I'm jealous. haha.
But still really good. I like Darkslaw though this is reminding me of Coraline.
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bufflingdrog [2012-02-20 19:16:56 +0000 UTC]
this is incredible! 8O couldn´t stop reading. And the picture is great to.
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RoseFox101 [2011-10-21 18:56:09 +0000 UTC]
i really like this plot line, you could probably get this published!
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Sammyed [2011-10-14 15:24:02 +0000 UTC]
Fallen in love with this story. So odd and surreal, just love it.
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Smoshlover1 [2011-10-02 21:31:48 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! you have lots of talent!
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Smoshlover1 In reply to CountANDRA [2011-10-03 03:15:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm new to all of this and my friend introduced me to decembersville. Your art is amazing and your writing is very good too. So far it is very much what I love.
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