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Description Chapter 2: Sophia and Darkslaw have a talk
          The night fell upon Canzingsvale Wood in a heartbeat and Sophia found herself in a large, pink, princess-like dress. Why? Because of a baby shower that her grandparents were proud to sponsor; at their house too. As much as she didn’t want to complain, all Sophia could do was whine about how she didn’t want to attend even though the party was going to be downstairs in the large foyer.
   “Don’t they have a house? Why does it have to be here? It’s so dumb.”
   “Please don’t say that, Sophie. They are very good friends of ours and…” the grandmother came in close to the child’s ear and whispered, “They don’t have the money to pay for the party.”
          Sophia just moaned and tried holding her tears back as her grandma pulled back her hair to create a different style; one that you create a top knot while a few hairs fall down the back. So if they need money, they mooch off of you, she thought privately.
    They were already changing for three hours and the little girl was getting frustrated with it all. She finally asked, “Tsk. Will there be any kids? Not only old people?”
Grandmother giggled lightly as she tugged on her hair, “Well…there are two boys coming over and I’m sure you’ll get to like—“
   “What? Darkslaw is coming?!”
   “No, sweetheart. They are boys who live in this house too; Slawamir and Lynus Darktrend. They are such angels.” She swooned. “Who’s Darkslaw?”
   “Never mind.”
          Sophia’s grandfather came into the light room and said excitingly, “And who’s that beautiful little princess right there? Not my Supergirl, I suppose. Haha.”
She smiled a tiny smile of pleasure but deep down Sophia felt like crap.


          “Ay! Mira que linda! Era como un princesa, Sophia!”
          “Hello! Do you remember me from when you were small?”
          “You look so adorable, I just want to eat you up!”
     Jeez, was that party for the baby or Sophia? She was like the main attraction of the gala and it annoyed her on many levels, but all she could do was smile and say “thank you” even though she didn’t mean it; it didn’t matter to her whether she looked like an angel from heaven or a hobo out of Detroit. She just wanted to go to sleep but grandma and grandpa wouldn’t let her. She had to be “very appropriate”…..whatever that meant.
The night seemed to drag on forever…and ever…and ever.
Was it the girl’s lack of patience or the clock that was getting her tense? Whatever it was, she took it in as she walked around randomly, bumping into people and trying to make her way through the maze of visitors. It was so annoying. TOO annoying.
          She got to meet the mother of the unborn child and she seemed really nice, but the problem was that she didn’t know how to stop talking. I swear, they were at it for an hour and all Sophia could do was reply, “uh-huh” and “really?” to all of the rambling. Inside she was just like “Shut up!”
          The music was slow and boring; all it consisted of was a piano playing a wannabe tune of the blues. The player looked as if he didn’t want to be there, but his job paid.
Not to mention the food there was bland; either bland or overdone, like salmon and apricot and whatever else they could find all chucked together on a stick. The second you even SMELLED that stuff, you’d go running for the hills. At least I would.
          It was hard not to fall asleep during the shower. Here Sophia thought it would be a huge party of excitement and kids to play around with (according to the past baby showers she’s been to), but it was just a bunch of adults chatting and chatting away about the baby and the gifts and the future and the blah blah blah. She lazily walked over to the small table where they served the desserts; surely they’d have something decent or sweet at the dessert table, right?
But there was nothing sweet on the table; there was nothing AT ALL.
Her curiosity sharpened until she heard some munches going on underneath the long wooden table.
She knew her grandparents didn’t have any pets, so Sophia ducked down and pulled up the cloth.
   “Oh! Whoops! Busted.”
   “WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH—“
  “Shh,” Darkslaw rasped; face stuffed with icing and an expression of curiosity looked at a mad Sophia. “There’s four hours left and no chicks; what the heck do you expect me to do, pixie?! Talk British with the bunch of aristocrats out there? I think not!”
   “That food is not yours! Put it back! Except for you, Lynus. You can have as much as you want.”
   “Hey! How come HE gets special treatment?! I’m the cutest out of us both.”
Sophia made a puny smile but reverted back to her annoyance saying, “HE’S not the weirdo around here! And you aren’t cute, Slawamir. You are a FREAK.”
   “It’s Darkslaw,” he corrected her with his mouth dripping with cookie crumbs. “And you just reminded me of something, pixie. Get under here.”
   “What? No!”
   “Fine. Earn the reputation of the cutest lil girl who talks to tables. I’ll be alright with that.”
God, she hated the feeling of defeat. When it came to dealing with that girl, you were either with her or against her. She gave in to his comment and crawled underneath the table. It was pretty spacey; sure beats walking aimlessly through the crowd of yammering guests. At least she had someone to nag at and talk to.
          “What do you want?” she demanded from him. “If they catch us like this, YOU are going to be in big trouble. Grandma will be mad at you.”
   “Ooooh. I quiver with trepidation. Look,” he handed her an M&M cookie. “I leave tomorrow, so I gotta have someone to listen in on my little tale before I leave. You happen to be the only one around here with a bit of imagination.”
After taking a munch out of the treat, Sophia looked at his eyes curiously saying, “Imagination?”
   “I can tell. You don’t have too much but it’s still there. I can see it.”
It sounded creepy the way he said it. What was this guy getting to? He came in closer to Sophia’s face while Lynus just sat behind her, eating whatever. She didn’t feel right, for some strange reason.
   “Ever heard of Decembersville?”
The whimsical word sounded familiar to her. She thought she remembered him mentioning something like that during their meeting in the afternoon, but she just shook her head in denial.
   “It’s a city. Not far. Well, I’ve only been there once but it’s pretty hard to forget about it.”
   “What are you talking about?” she asked, weirdly.
   “I’m talking about a city where certain people known as ‘freaks’ live. Yeah. I said it. And you know what, pixie? It’s…right….in….your….backyard.”
Those words felt chilling. He sounded so serious on this nonsense. Sophia wanted to call him crazy and crawl out from under the table….but she stayed. She stayed and listened. Her amusement and anxiety rose up a level.
          “What do you mean?” she asked. Her eyes widened in oddity as she looked at Darkslaw’s face. He looked as if he knew what he was talking about, which was probably the reason Sophia felt a little distant even though she barely knew the boy for a few minutes.
          “I mean,” he continued, whispering. “There is a city in the woods where freaks live. There is a snowy, zany little city hidden somewhere in the woods; deep, deep, deep, deep, DEEP in the woods. And the best part is: it only appears at night.”
The small tale sounded almost like a ghost story to the little girl. She hated them the most. Her sister (now in college) once scared her to tears with a story about a girl who got lost in the woods and was eaten by the wolves, only to haunt the place and eat whoever she could lay her eyes on. The story still kept her awake at night and on the verge of crying. Now this teen is telling her the story of a monster-infested city in the woods that randomly appears at night.
Sophia said in the calmest way she could, “So…why are you telling me this? I don’t care.”
   “Really? Okay,” Darkslaw replied more joyfully and dumb. “Then I suppose you won’t mind if we kind of took a little rendezvous tonight.”
Sophia stared at him.
   “In the woods. At night. In the misty darkness with nothing but my flashlight to keep us on track….minus the wolves and bears. Hehehehehee.”
Sophia felt her heart pound forcefully. No. She didn’t want to go. She couldn’t go. There was no way. No way at all. So she responded, “No.”
   Darkslaw instantly sighed as if he was waiting for her to answer that way. “Figures. Pixies like you are such big babies when it comes to this kind of ‘adventure’ stuff.”
That sparked some rage and stubbornness in Sophia’s spirit.
   “I’m NOT a baby! Shut up!”
   “Oh, aren’t you? Prove it.”
   “No!” she quickly added. “I’m not allowed to go out at night! I can’t even be by myself for a long time! I’m not allowed to do that stuff!”
   “And I was not allowed to steal this food off the table,” Darkslaw smiled evilly. “Yet here we are.”
Those words sounded powerful to the child. Lynus was listening as well but expressed no interest.
All Sophia could do was stare down at her crumb-covered hands. Her insides tightened.
She felt Darkslaw’s mouth near her ear as he whispered,
“I’ll pick you up at midnight…Sophia.”
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Comments: 83

raven2360 [2016-03-13 04:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Someone please link me to chapter 1... I can't find it. T-T

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SolidArrow [2014-05-16 06:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Rereading this bad boy has been super enlightening. I get a lot more of stuff that Darkslaw foreshadows, and I see how Sophia progressed as a person though out.
I also remember now remember how Darkslaw came off like any other weirdo teen picking on a younger kid at first, and the whole forest mishap, then everyone in Decembersville talk about how he was such a hero, and super brave. It lets in a little bit of his character through out the story and makes me really wanna know more about the guy!!
I got caught up with all the chapters a little less then three weeks ago, and I'm still in love with it! love the whole freaking thing, and the uniqueness of it all, to the point where I am totally obsessed with everything to do with it!

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xenmas3000 [2013-09-04 23:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. Decembersville story part 2 reading part 3 & 4

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Owlette23 [2012-08-13 16:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Where's the first chapter :A:

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CountANDRA In reply to Owlette23 [2012-08-13 16:29:00 +0000 UTC]

In the gallery of this story all the way at the top titled "Decembersville Ch. 1"

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Owlette23 In reply to CountANDRA [2012-08-13 17:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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bethanyhorvath [2012-08-12 19:25:19 +0000 UTC]

This is too good but I must ask how old is sophia

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CountANDRA In reply to bethanyhorvath [2012-08-13 16:29:13 +0000 UTC]

She is only 11. C:

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Secretsister16 [2012-04-17 00:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh I LOVE Darkslaw. Wish I knew a guy like that.
I think I shivered a bit whenhe whispered in her ear XD

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payden174 [2011-12-20 02:04:34 +0000 UTC]

MUST READ MORE

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lamename13 [2011-11-02 00:04:39 +0000 UTC]

wow no wonder why my friend Shay is surprised i haven't read this story yet. Wow this is awesome! :3

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yjlovestodraw [2011-07-16 19:10:26 +0000 UTC]

0.o what happened to chapter one? I wanted to read your story due to one of my friends recommending it, but I can't seem to find the beginning! D:

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CountANDRA In reply to yjlovestodraw [2011-07-16 19:56:57 +0000 UTC]

It is in the Decembersville gallery all the way at the top. Its the illustration of a snowy girl in the night surrounded by fireflies. XD

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yjlovestodraw In reply to CountANDRA [2011-07-17 12:33:28 +0000 UTC]

That took me a while XP I need better eyes, I swear XP

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yjlovestodraw In reply to CountANDRA [2011-07-17 12:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3 <3

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Pickled-Herring [2011-06-23 05:50:55 +0000 UTC]

This...is an awesome story! I...am going to have to watch you! I would read more, but I should probably head to bed soon...Hopefully I can read this at my grandma's house!

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ForeverSpeel [2011-05-29 02:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Um . . . where's chapter 1? O.o

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CountANDRA In reply to ForeverSpeel [2011-05-29 02:59:38 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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ForeverSpeel In reply to CountANDRA [2011-05-29 03:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^ I went and read Cha 2 anyway, I was so curious, haha. IT'S REALLY GOOD!

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unknownXartist [2011-05-25 20:28:21 +0000 UTC]

I love Darkslaw and Sophia!! The fact that Darkslaw is so weird makes it fantastic x) And Haha I don't know why, but I love the last line ;D

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Secretsister16 In reply to unknownXartist [2012-04-17 00:11:06 +0000 UTC]

The last line was the best wasn't it XD

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FallenAngelKokoro [2011-04-21 06:00:27 +0000 UTC]

ah~ the more i read the more i am glued to the screen~ X3 i am loving darkslaw ;D

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spacerocketbunny [2011-02-23 23:47:05 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy your humorous and "matter-of-fact" writing style. It's written in a way where it's unique and the sarcasm and the exaggerrations kind of reminds me of a dark british-esque humour, it just makes me grin like an idiot
You point out that Sophia gets easily angered, but I find that to be a very charming quality, and the way you develop her personality, really makes her an intriguing and hilarious character.
Darkslaw too, It made me laugh how they kept messing up his name, I thought it to be kind of witty and delightful.
I really enjoy his character as well because he's just...He is quite strange but endearing in a way how he confides so easily with Sophia and automatically expresses this intimacy with his impulse to tell his tale.

I don't know why I didn't start reading this earlier, I can't wait to read more!

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CountANDRA In reply to spacerocketbunny [2011-02-23 23:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, you are commenting at the WROOOONG time, man, because these first billion chapters are two years old and written CRAPPILY. I puke blood just LOOKING at em! XD Still, though, it warms me to the bone that you like it, man. Really perks me up, actually. Sure its not nicely-written, but... come on, its just for fun. xD
Truly, you are too kind. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ^^

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spacerocketbunny In reply to CountANDRA [2011-02-24 01:06:23 +0000 UTC]

I realize that these chapters are old and you've definitely improved since then, but I can't help but notice that there's still a lot of potential in these older chapters and there's a lot that I like about them.
with that, it just makes me super excited to see the latest chapters.
you're welcome, and I am going to continue commenting, whether you are embarrassed by these chapters or not.

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BloodyGodot [2011-02-22 15:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Augh, I discovered this yesterday, and I'm only on Chapter Two, and I'm hooked DX
I'm like, flailing at the art and the story itself -- and the knowledge that it only gets better makes me dribble 8O
Next chapter, hehehehe ...

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WtWtch [2011-02-22 03:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Spanish. Haha, awesomesauce. I like where this is going so far. And I would totally be Darkslaw's friend. He seems cool.

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chibivampire2122 [2011-02-21 11:17:02 +0000 UTC]

honestly i wouldve hooked up with darkslaw by now just because hes wierd and seems kinda flirty

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Lavender-demoness [2011-02-05 03:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Your writing "voice" is seriously beginning to come out. Before it had been a little scatter (Yeah, you said no critiques but I can't help it, sorry) I gotta say this is beginning to really interest me. I really like it.

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CountANDRA In reply to Lavender-demoness [2011-02-05 03:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, dude. ^^ But really, this is embarrassing because this writing is two years old and whenever I look back at the first 20 or so chapters then I CRINGE because I reeeaaalllyyy was not focusing much on how to write and just puked whatever was in my head out. I hope to someday edit them all but when I get the proper motivation. xD

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ThenThereWasZero [2011-01-23 01:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Really amazing !

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CountANDRA In reply to ThenThereWasZero [2011-01-23 03:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you! ^^
Though TRUST ME when I say that the first bunch of chapters in this story are written very... sloppily and lazily. -__- Yeah, two years ago I wasn't too coordinated.
But still, I thank you very much for taking the time to read this tale, man! <3

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ThenThereWasZero In reply to CountANDRA [2011-01-23 04:07:14 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing. I love it and you inspired me to write something Halloweenish I should say. xD It's called ...And Then There Was Zero. Zero has always been my favorite name for some reason xD

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Ashen-whisper [2010-12-07 18:06:47 +0000 UTC]

this is pretty good so far i should tell you that it would be una princesa, though i hate to be nit-picky, because your writing is way better than mine Nice work!

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pezfish26 [2010-08-28 19:31:46 +0000 UTC]

wow this is really an interesting story! i love the plot so far! keep up the great work!

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rebornfangirl13 [2010-08-20 03:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Did you post this on another site as well?

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CountANDRA In reply to rebornfangirl13 [2010-08-26 02:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Nope, not at all. ^^ This is pretty much the only site that has it (as far as I know).

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roseandthorn [2010-07-23 04:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Make as you go along? Those are how the best stories are made! ^-^
Very interesting so far.

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CountANDRA In reply to roseandthorn [2010-07-23 20:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh, please believe me when I say that it gets A BILLION TIMES BETTER in future chapters because these first... 30 chapters are written very amateurishly.

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Twilitefairy [2010-07-03 13:23:57 +0000 UTC]

>w< Darkslaw, i love yoou!!! lol XD

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Nuclearbones [2010-05-28 01:16:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm making a make-stuff-up-as-I-go-along story too!!

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CountANDRA In reply to Nuclearbones [2010-05-28 01:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Really? Isn't it so hard yet so fun!?

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Nuclearbones In reply to CountANDRA [2010-05-28 02:06:51 +0000 UTC]

It is fun! Just writing random stuff that fits so well into the story makes even better, just like the way Decembersville goes along! The story's adding suspense as you go further and further, I like it.

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Byhuldra [2010-01-23 20:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Cool... O.O This story is getting interesting.

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memfox00 [2009-12-03 14:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Darkslaw is kind of creepy TxT

I like it XP

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CountANDRA In reply to memfox00 [2009-12-05 21:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha, thank you ^^
He's supposed to be a bit of a creepball ^^

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memfox00 In reply to CountANDRA [2009-12-07 13:51:29 +0000 UTC]

It works!!

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InvaderSTELLAR [2009-08-07 23:37:20 +0000 UTC]

A very interesting story you have here indeed~! It is a pleasure to read and I am going to read more~!

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CountANDRA In reply to InvaderSTELLAR [2009-08-08 01:56:51 +0000 UTC]

I am really honored seeing that you are giving my story a chance ^^
Thanks

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InvaderSTELLAR In reply to CountANDRA [2009-08-08 01:59:10 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome~! I luv your stuff.

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