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Story&art - by me, Anastasiya YasenetckayaEnglish translation - by my friend Evgeniya Golovanova
Should be read FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!
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That looks like it's going to hurt some serious bruises.
If I can make a strong suggestion about bubble font, but not exactly taking apart your artwork. In comics, it's best to make your bubble font explosive and spike jaggy when someone shouts! and always try and keep the dialog in the middle of the bubble. I struggle with this time to time, but it's very VERY important to ask you self each time, Did I do it right and does it set in the middle of the bubble. Every time, it's very important.
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