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Crazy-One — Envy

Published: 2003-09-22 21:00:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Description Frozen deep inside myself
The angels I do fear
For their beauty
Unparalleled
Is all that I hold dear

Their flitting forms
Like misty breath
Dance all throughout my head
Their voices chiming like the bells
Until they leave me deaf

The snowy wings of feathers pure
Give me a sense of dread
Because my own
Ragged, Torn
Makes my heart go dead

Throughout the night I scream and cry
Throughout the day I cower
For this dream, this hellish dream
Will continue on for ev'ry day and hour

"I wish I could be one of them,"
I say at the end of ev'ry day
But wishes will do nothing in
The bitter world of

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Comments: 4

decemberdreams [2003-10-31 03:10:03 +0000 UTC]

i LOVE the shading and hatching and the overall simplicity of it!! Very neat!
and the poem is very well written! good choice of words!!

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toxicness [2003-09-22 21:30:32 +0000 UTC]

this is great!! what was your grade? the teacher probably that you were depressed O_o mwhaha i likes it alots

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n1nj4zero [2003-09-22 21:02:22 +0000 UTC]

That's not too bad!

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Crazy-One In reply to n1nj4zero [2003-09-22 21:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but I still don't care for it too much. But I didn't have anything having to do with writings here, and I haven't finished a story yet, so this was the next best thing.

Thanks though!

*huggles*

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