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crazychc800 — The dream keeper
Published: 2008-11-21 20:37:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Come lie in my bed and fall asleepRest your eyes and breathe through me
Kiss my lips and dance with insanity
Wander through my pretentious reality
I'll show you my world if you're willing to see
I'll sing you songs of immortality
Pass through my fantasy
Taste my tranquility
Cross the line between holy and unworthy
Follow me into infernal hypocrisy
I'll bring you to hell if you let me
I'm the dream keeper, everything you've ever dreamed
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infused with surreality, logic has no place here. this speaks directly to the psyche and its overall message is one of possibilities that vary with each individual. I think the key to understanding this lies not so much in our ability to correctly analyze and interpret someone elses writing style or situation, but in being able to recognize our own truth when confronted with it.
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HA! wow... your good
thats what i was going for
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(laughing) i have this gift (sometimes not a gift!)..to be able to "see" people a bit deeper than whats normal. or sense things that arent spoken or shared. it freaks people out sometimes so i keep a reign on it. but yeah, this thing you wrote really yelled at me on that deeper level. i tried to keep it light cuz i didnt want to come across as some psycho sigmund freud! LOL...
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na i like psychos. go all out...
i have no gift other then telling my OWN future...
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ah...not true. you have gifts aplenty.
some are still emerging and you struggle a bit with those, and probably see them as more a pain in the ass than a talent or a gift, but nurture it, embrace that part of yourself. time will ripen it beautifully into the woman you are becoming. It will be a part of your uniqueness that makes you stand out, and also a source of your strength as you learn to trust it and trust your inner voice that is already starting to get more insistant when you ignore it. but i think you are beginning to realize this already. you are capable of giving love to another at a depth most people cant without losing themselves in the process, or running the other person off by smothering them. thats one gift youve got that will tie into this other one i spoke of earlier. you pull deep from within yourself. you also drain yourself too deeply when you do this. you wipe yourself out. ever feel like you love somebody so much that its swallowing you up and your dog paddling and treading all the emotions it brings without being able to touch bottom? you do that. but you dont cling. instead you pour all that emotion into the other person and strive to get it equally as deep witin them . and heres another gift, a powerful one...one you dont trust yourself with yet because you havent learned to control your tendacy to abuse it to get what you think you want from .. a man you love. it isnt a new one by the way,this one goes back to your childhood, where you practiced it shamelessly...its just that its taken on an entire new concept within the last maybe 4or 5 years. anyways, by now you probably are really thinking PSYCHO! LOL! i took this deeper than i meant to.when i read your comment about how you think you have no gifts, i couldnt leave here without telling you how mistaken you are, and the ones i see without even knowing you. anyways, i need to get off the computer and go to the grocery store, but if you want me to finsh send me a note, i will check back later.
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please finish. lol and you are right
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i will be back, just checking in for a sec. right now i've got people over and its too distracting. i can chit chat no problem with others around me, but to do that "seeing" thing...i need it quiet....i havent forgotten you.
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thank you
im glad you like it my love
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wow I like it you are very creative, though I am a bit confused on what it is about... Is it about the dream keeper taking you to hell? if not what is it about?
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its talking about living life in fantasy. Losing contact with reality.
i guess my idea originally is that the dream keeper has all the power over you once you give it to him. and he has the power to take you to hell(a nightmare) or a sort of... heaven(a good dream)
i dont know. it didnt come out the way i wanted. but im glad you like it
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well I think you did a great job of writing it..
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