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Published: 2009-12-26 19:32:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 11890; Favourites: 141; Downloads: 323
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page two of commissioned comic...Not sure if I like it... there something about it that seems... off.
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hmm well I do have another site with pics on FA
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Oh yes, I've seen it...and shame on you.
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:3 this will be colored and a end cap picture with the sultan fox enjoying his new harem girl
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Waiter, I'd like a bottle of whatever she had... >.>;
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Dood, do you even realize how expensive a bottle of that costs!? I had to pay four months rent for it, only to have it stolen by that fox. D:
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'We're', not 'Where'
Just thought I'd point that out. Anyway, awesome piece, loving the battle pose followed by brainwashing.
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Apparently a good attack even if he isn't the Wicked Witch.
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Not sure if you like it?
In my opinion both pages are fun and well done
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D'oh!
and this is why I have a very low score in my english writing GED but I high understanding of the written word
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I like the first page quite a bit (lol at the frothing mouth) and I do like the second page... but yeah, something DOES feel a bit off, though I can't put my finger on it....
Maybe not enough wine? <_>
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hmmm Maybe.
That or I should add some background Harem girls?
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Hmm, either the harem girls, or maybe move the "obey" bit and add one scene with the new harem girl in a brain-washed-but-not-dizzy-anymore state?
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Heh, very interesting indeed. Funny how enemies become quite the fine help later on, after some work of course. Ha ha!
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We'd make a fortune if that were real.
I have to wonder what would happen if you threw that wine on a girl though. Would she become a hot stud or just be a sexy babe?
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knowing the caster wants a harem...Sexy Girl
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Still, it's a nice idea on how to make harems grow!
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Hmm so do the guy's mind controll powers only work on women, or was it part of the wine-throw spell?
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part of the wine powers
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Now that's a lively vintage...
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something that seems off? The only thing that immediately strike me as off is "where" instead of "we're", but I'm not sure that's what you meant X3
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Sorry, I guess saying that is a little rude...
Then again, a watcher commenting on what might be "off"... is probably a rude thing in itself, so double sorry on that!
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nope, not rude to me. I was basically asking for opinions to try and figure out what might be wrong :3
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Only an idiot discounts a magical personage with a harrem.
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and the whole, "You stole my girlfriend for a harem," thing should have been a clue...
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not to mention the fact that... well... what idiot just throws wine at a person?
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