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crazyflutegirl — I still Love You

Published: 2006-01-13 13:30:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description I Still Love You

I see you now and then around,
You always make me grin.
I come to you, you come to me,
You make the whole world spin.

You brighten up the world,
You steal away the sadness.
You make me see the good in life,
And save me from my madness.

And when I look into to your eyes,
I wonder if you’ll remember.
The times I spent on at your side,
The times when we’re together.

And yet you never hold me,
You never call me yours.
And I tried so hard to make you happy,
But you turned and shut the doors.

But even as I know this,
I’m still in love with you.
I hold you deep within my heart,
In hopes you’ll love me to.
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Comments: 21

lahere [2006-01-22 23:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Definitely one of the most heartfelt poems I've read in a while. Beautiful!

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crazyflutegirl In reply to lahere [2006-01-23 15:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Your thoughts are appricated!!!!

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Spankx [2006-01-21 00:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Pretty poem and kinda sad .. good work

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Spankx [2006-01-23 15:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Le-Nubian [2006-01-18 16:57:06 +0000 UTC]

aw! that is so pretty yet sad. bitter-sweet, i loved it.

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Le-Nubian [2006-01-18 17:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Gald you did, it's a close poem to me

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CaptainOzz [2006-01-13 21:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Been there. Cept... no matter i'll save the war stories.

Very touching. well written.

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crazyflutegirl In reply to CaptainOzz [2006-01-16 13:18:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Star-Watcher [2006-01-13 17:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Excellent Poem! Aww Hope Your Okay!!

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Star-Watcher [2006-01-13 20:15:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll be fine

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Iceman1387 [2006-01-13 14:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Again beautiful, your style is basic which isnt bad, but you take that style and you use such great subject matter and word it beautifuly, great work, keep it up

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Iceman1387 [2006-01-13 14:31:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Iceman1387 In reply to crazyflutegirl [2006-01-13 14:35:08 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Iceman1387 [2006-01-13 16:15:23 +0000 UTC]

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Ninver [2006-01-13 13:47:51 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful...and saddening...and wonderful. Like a rainy morning.

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Ninver [2006-01-13 16:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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starlit-sky [2006-01-13 13:38:39 +0000 UTC]

great poem!!!
simple and trully heartfelt!...
amazing work!

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crazyflutegirl In reply to starlit-sky [2006-01-13 16:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!!

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starlit-sky In reply to crazyflutegirl [2006-01-13 23:09:33 +0000 UTC]

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Gaabs [2006-01-13 13:35:27 +0000 UTC]

jeez... that's... sad
beautiful.
I really like it.
are You really sad because of someone?
Is this poem showing Your real feelings?

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crazyflutegirl In reply to Gaabs [2006-01-13 16:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Umm yes, actually. I am in love with someone but he'll never love me back... but i love the poem... he he

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