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JadeThePredator [2008-01-08 07:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Aww... Diao Chan is cool. I think she's really pretty, too. Can't wait for DW6 (comes out on February 20th, I think! *has it reserved*)!

As for critiquing this lovely picture, it seems to me like her arms are a little too short, and her hair being darker than others in some places looks a little odd. But other than that, I think you did fine.

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Senbonzakura168 [2007-12-15 09:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Mmm.... Not much to say that the person before didn't

The lines are too pointy in some places, and I don't think you can make the top look 'on' her without any shading

But this looks great, I love your take on this ^^

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EvilTelephone [2007-11-23 05:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow I like! I think she looks very pretty. I think I like the hip area most. Looks best and most detail to me.

I normally dont critique anything but since you want...

Lines - some of the lines seem a little too straight. For example the shoulders. When drawing straight lines are pretty much never used except for swords or buildings or such. Just a slighter curve would make it look tons better.

Clothes- One reason why I like the hips so much is cause the cloth actually looks like its wrapped around her. The top looks kinda flat to me, you need to make more details or shading to show that the top is actually on her!

That's all I can give hope I helped!

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Revan-Ghost [2007-11-18 08:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Very good work!!
I'm not an expert but her anatomy looks fine for me.

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LizleMouton [2007-11-12 15:51:29 +0000 UTC]

it's really good! the only thing that jumps out at me is where the arm attaches to the torso on the right (if ur looking at it) it looks little unrealistic compared to the rest of the pic. but other than that it looks really great!

if u don't have photoshop how did you outline it???

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KiubezUndermann [2007-11-12 00:39:48 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooo i like! i don't know anything about the game so i cant pass judgment on the character, herself.
as for the drawing. i think it looks good. the arms may be a touch short, as chibigingi mentioned. but otherwise, it looks very good. with that particular style, it's ok and sometimes desirable to have the proportions be a little off for a more dynamic effect. me likie

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chibigingi [2007-11-11 17:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Critique-wise, her arms are a little too short (only a little), or her head is too large. The torso and legs look fine, but the arms and head are a bit out of proportion, at least from my viewpoint. Especially the arm to the right... the length from the shoulder to the elbow is a tad bit shorter than the left arms'.

I hope that helps some. I'm going to start a slue of DW6 character pictures as soon as I finish this commission and get the art book...

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fullmetalkittn [2007-11-11 08:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice! But I don't like Diao Chan!

Regardless. Your anatomy looks better than the game's. XD I don't know what it is! It just looks off to me on her cg stuff! The only thing that looks strange is her hair here with the back being way darker. Are you gonna color it?

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