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shyvampiress1997 [2013-04-01 20:49:37 +0000 UTC]
Dude no! I need this chapter! Note me please!
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rex4487 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-05-21 09:59:35 +0000 UTC]
god this is awesome i cant wait fore more of this
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rex4487 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-05-21 20:27:24 +0000 UTC]
are you gonna make more of this
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shyvampiress1997 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-04-01 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm unable to view it because of the mature content label...
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antinaruhana [2013-01-06 04:55:15 +0000 UTC]
can you make more really good fic
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antinaruhana In reply to CRed1988 [2013-01-06 05:51:20 +0000 UTC]
k remember ask and ill help
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xXevilbumnyXx [2012-11-19 06:22:43 +0000 UTC]
No fun i can see it
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dgj212 [2012-11-09 03:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Nice, you did better than last time, but i still think somethings missing...Like...I donno, something missing that for sure. Yeah there's still room for improvement, I should know, I have really bad grammar and spelling...yeah I shouldn't talk but, I think your doing better than me.
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-09 04:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment man. I try my best!
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-09 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Same here, but i'm just too lazy and I'm working on a lot of stuff, like this unique narutoxfu relationship I thought of...I mean I'm pretty sure no one has thought of this!
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-09 04:33:28 +0000 UTC]
Creative you know...And there will be more of those pairing I promise you!
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-09 23:25:30 +0000 UTC]
KK
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-09 23:33:40 +0000 UTC]
^^
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-10 05:01:30 +0000 UTC]
^_^
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-10 06:04:47 +0000 UTC]
^^
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-10 06:48:21 +0000 UTC]
It was misty morning in Konoha. The sun was rising, birds were beginning their usual routine. Most ninja's with early morning shifts are forcing themselves out of bed while ninja's with late night shift devour what food they can before they happily fall (literally) asleep on their beds or couches, actually a few fall a sleep standing up. And then you have your usual shop keepers and restaurant owners who begin setting up shop for the day, some rush to the markets to get the first pick of the day while others motivate and declare war on their rivals on business scale. Yes it was another peaceful morning where the village starts to bloom to life.
"Ugh..." moaned one of the two guards by the village gate as the other yawned and stretched.
"I swear its boring every morning" Izumo yawned out as he stretched before he rested his head on his fist.
"Mourning already?" Kotetsu asked with a little smirk on his face as he laid back with his hands behind his head with his eyes closed.
"...If that wasn't clever I would punch you right now" Izumo said, still in the same position.
"No you wouldn't" Kotetsu said "other wise you'd have done it by now."
"True...though now I can see why morning are for mournings."
"Ugh...mourning. I hate mourning" Kotesu said with an obvious distaste in his mouth.
"Not a morning person I take it?"
"Nobody is."
"True..." Izumo sighed, "morning and mournings...Oi Kotetsu."
"What Izumo?" Kotetsu asked as he opened one eye.
"If you ever mourn for me, would it be in the morning?"
"Donno" Kotetsu, said before he closed his eye "I'm kinda hoping I don't have to mourn for you."
"Same...ugh damn mornings...If only I had breakfast."
"Mourning breakfast?"
"Yes...breakfast is usually in the morning, Kotetsu."
"No the other morning."
"Yes I am mourning for breakfast...you?" He asked as he faced Kotetsu.
"Yep."
Izumo sighed before he returned to formal position and closed his eyes and opened them again "Kotetsu open your eyes, though nothing happens in the morning, we have a job to do." Kotetsu just scratched below his eye but above the bandage on his that for some reason covers his nose.
"Ugh...I'm mourning for the morning to be over."
"Nice...I hate the morning shifts *Yawn*."
Both ninjas were semi-wake, semi-sleep so...their visions wasn't 20/20 at the moment. So when a guy wearing an Orange and Black jumpsuit and an old Guy with long white hair that came down in spike with a red and green attire and a caramel figure with mint green hair passed by...It all looked like like blobs.
"I'm finally back after two and half years" said the guy in the orange jumpsuit.
"Yep, time sure goes by fast, huh?"
"Hell no Pervy-sage, it felt like forever, dattebayo!"
As the two figures disappeared Izumo and Kotetsu were a bit shocked and their faces was clear testament to that.
"Um Izumo" Kotetsu asked.
"Yes Kotetsu?"
"That was Naruto and master Jiraiya that passed by, right?"
"Right..."
"So...who was that girl that was with Naruto?"
"Donno...why do we care?"
"Donno...Oh look, here come's Sakura."
"And it looks like Konohamaru and his friends are following behind."
"What do we do?"
Izumo smirked "What we always do."
Kotetsu reciprocate the smirk "sometimes you gotta love the morning shift for it's perks."
"Yep" Izumo said as he straighten up as Sakura and team Ebisu approached them.
"Hey Kotetsu, Izumo" said the pink haired with a smile and a wave.
"Hey/Yo" they both greeted.
"Ya know I think you guys should head back to town" Izumo said which earned a "Huh?" from the group. Kotetsu smirked and said "If you guys go, you'll find something interesting."
"Like what?" Sakura asked as Team Ebisu said "yeah."
Both guys smirked. "Take a guess" Izumo said. Sakura was the first one to catch on. Her eyes widened and a smiled appeared on her face.
"Naruto's back!" She yelled as both guys reduced their smirks to smile. Konohamaru, Moegi, and Udon yelled in both surprise and happiness "Boss is back!"
"Which way did he go!?" Sakura asked "Which way-Which way!" yelled the little ninja squad.
"That way" Kotetsu answered as he pointed "NOW RUN!"
The group nodded and ran as fast as they could.
Izumo waited a while before he laughed "Isn't that the other way?"
"Yep. But if I know that brat well, he'll probably be on some pole somewhere to shout out that he's back or something."
"True. I'm really surprised that you didn't make them jump or anything" Izumo said as he turned to look at Kotetsu.
"You kiddin'? That Sakura could kill knock me into next week with a punch."
"True...Oh look it's Ayame."
"Yep...wanna mess with her?"
"You know it! Man you got to love the morning shift."
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-10 07:15:26 +0000 UTC]
hmmm
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-10 07:18:03 +0000 UTC]
first half that unique narutoxfu relationship I was talking about. Lot of people gonna love it and hate at the same time
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-10 07:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Why the hate?
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-10 07:35:21 +0000 UTC]
you'll see hahahahaha
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-10 07:45:28 +0000 UTC]
right...
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dgj212 In reply to CRed1988 [2012-11-10 23:28:49 +0000 UTC]
no seriously wait for it
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CRed1988 In reply to dgj212 [2012-11-10 23:31:24 +0000 UTC]
ok
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