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I do not own Naruto characters

*RING, RING*

The bell has rung as the students pack up their supplies and talking among themselves leaving one lone female student behind who is slowly getting up and headed out the classroom. She has a regular school uniform, red long hair is short and spiky on the right side, while longer and straight on the left side giving half her hair the appearance of being spiky and somewhat unkempt on one side, while the other side is neat and straight and brown glasses on. Her name is Karin who is currently sixteen years old. While walking on the hallway while her head is down, she is bump by several females’ students.

“Hey watch where you are going freak!”

“Yeah, geek!”

“Loser!”

Karin lower her head even further as the bullies continue in the other direction still jeering. Her life is sucks because she have no friends at all due to her grades are booming (in this case excels all of her classes) but at the same time, many students calling her geek, freak, weirdo and so on. She ever even wondering is it worth it to lower the grades a little to gain a friend at least. However she dismissed that thought since that will go against her nature and character. Besides it’s too late, since she has gotten a scholarship that is too good to pass up and will not risk it.

She rushed out the school and headed to her home. Locked her room up, she tossed her book-bag aside and then strips off her school uniform. Lounging in her matching red bra and panties on at the same time, sign in the school online chat in her laptop while placing her glasses on the bed. She always leaves her underwear on since she feels very comfortable with it. What no one knows except her parents is that she have been working out in secret that her body is toned and feminine but her school uniform is cover so that is not surprise. It’s a smart thing that she volunteers to help the nurse office instead of the gym activity since both of them are related to each other in terms of grades. She chatted with few different people so far and they all ended up leaving the chat as if they know who she is which Karin hoping that isn’t the case. Just as she is about to sign off, there is one more anonymous and as far as she knows, this one is new as if this is the first time. Taking the chance, she clicks it and beginning to chat.

*Start chat with Ramen-Lover Nine*

Ruby Eye- Hi, First time here?
                                               
Ramen-Lover Nine – Yeah. I’m done on my project and decided to try it here and you are the first person to talk to.

Ruby Eye- Cool. So what are you doing today since you finished the project as you said?

Ramen Lover Nine- Freaking nothing. Other than listening to music and chatting with you, nothing much. What about you?

Ruby Eye- Same here, nothing other than hoping to make a new friend.

Karin cursed herself to type that without thinking. Before she can type back to apologize that, another message kick in.

Ramen Lover Nine – Well I’ll be your new friend. If you are ok with that?

Karin can feel her heart is beating very steady. This could be her chance to gain a friend for a long time and she will waste it. After taking a deep breath, she types it in.

Ruby Eye- Yes! I want to be your friend.

Ramen Lover Nine – See. We are now friends!

Just like that, Karin was jumping around in her room with a smile on her face. It’s may be a bit childish but she doesn’t care since she is too happy.

Ramen Lover Nine – I gotta go. Eating dinner. Talk to you later friend.

Ramen Lover Nine has logged out of the chat

Karin closed the laptop after her little ‘happy dance’. She goes to her book-bag and pulls out her homework to beginning doing it. She may hate homework in passion but that didn’t take away her smile on her face to finally gain a friend.

XXXXX

Days turn into weeks and in Karin mind, it’s feels like forever. While school is pretty much the same (more teasing from the students in her class calling her geek), chatting a friend online take away her problem and made her happy. She learns a lot of this ‘Ramen Lover Nine’ character. For one, this person is a boy who is the same age as her. He love gardens very much stating that he have plants in his room. His favorite food is ramen which is not surprising giving his username is a giveaway. His favorite hobby is pranks and giving the things he did that make Karin to laugh out loud that almost made her fell off the bed. Giving her happy mood, Karin told him about herself, her likes and dislikes, and so on. She couldn’t wait to meet him after talking to him for so long and it’s appear that she got her wish after he bring up the topic on online.

Ramen Lover Nine – Can we meet?

Karin could swear that her heart is pounding on that. Will she really meet him or not? After several seconds debating on her mind, she types her answer on the laptop.

Ruby Eye – Sure, when and where?

Ramen Lover Nine – There is a zoo that is not too far from the school. I’ll meet you there at twelve at noon in the entrance on the weekend how that?

Karin thinks on that. This online school chat is for only one educational and she knows that the person she talks to is someone she attends at the same school. With that being said, she types it up. She prays that he isn’t one of her classes that have pick on her.

Ruby Eye - Ok I’ll see you there. Just so that you know who I am, I have red long hair so that way you won’t miss me.

Ramen Lover Nine – Ok, I wear a t-shirt that has ramen on it. Can’t wait to see you.

Ruby Eye – See you there.

Ramen Lover Nine – Bye.

Karin took her deep breath and at the same time, closes her laptop. She jump off her bed and opened her closet to see dozen of dresses. She has plenty of times to choose which she will wear and can’t wait to meet him.

XXXXX

Karin is nervous while she is standing near the entrance in the zoo. She kept her hair style as it is and wondering is it wise to keep her geeky glasses on (being nearsighted, her vision is poor without them). She wears a short white casual sundress since today is a hot day along with her purse. She feels out of place since she rarely go anywhere in public to hang out let alone at the zoo since she mostly at home doing nothing other than assignments. She looks around to see mostly teenagers having a good time including the parents along the children. She is so glad that no classmates of her are here to making fun of her again. She turn to her cell-phone to see her time to show twelve o’clock right on the mark and someone is calling to her direction as well.

“Hi, are you Ruby Eye?”

Karin blinked to see a teenager boy in front of her who a bit taller than her. He has a blond spiky hair and features his whisker mark on each of his cheek. He wears a white sleeveless shirt that shows a noodle on it and blue jeans. She blinked again and says it in response after a good long look at him.

“And you are Ramen Lover Nine?”

And in return is the boy gives her a grin which made her cheeks in red shows that he is handsome up close.

“Yeah. My real name is Naruto Uzumaki. You?”

“Karin.”

Both shakes hand and both of them headed to the zoo together. Throughout the afternoon to see each animals, Karin for the first time was having a good time with Naruto. She was surprise that meeting him in real life was a shocker since she was so use to talking to him online and Naruto couldn’t agree with her more. Naruto even stated that she was pretty in person wishing that he would have met her sooner who made Karin blush even further that matches her hair. No one has called her pretty before in her life. She told him that nobody have told her on anything other than geeky or nerdy due to her appearance and grades. Naruto stated that the students are jerks, jealous and they shouldn’t say such a thing. And judging the smile on her face support his fact since he is the only one looked past her appearance and knowing her on the inside.

After the zoo is closing and getting dark at night, Karin invited Naruto to her home stating that her parents are on the meetings of their jobs and won’t be home for a while which he is ok with it and in return he will cook the dinner much to her surprise. While Naruto cooking dinner after Karin showing him the ingredients and food supplies, she take a quick shower too dressed up only her red tank top and a white short to come back to the kitchen to see him done.  And dinner was real good in Karin opinion. While Naruto love ramen, he can cook something else that is simple and Karin almost wish that she need cooking lesson because she either takeout or microwave dinner and Naruto wouldn’t mind to help. She shows him around her home and Naruto will promise her that he will do the same if he invited her to his place which Karin agreed.

While Naruto is settled in Karin room alone since she is getting a dessert from the kitchen, he is feeling a bit odd since he have never been a girl room before. His life is not that great. His parents are gone and his only relative is his godfather Jiraiya. Not only is he writes a literature that involved porn, he even self-proclaim super prevent who is not ashamed to admit it. Despite that, he has been raised by him since birth and he is even wonder to himself that how is he, a normal teenager didn’t act like his godfather. He didn’t have to ponder long as his cellphone ring and answer it.

“Yes?” Naruto said.

“Hey, Naruto where are you?” The other line said and it’s an older man voice knowing that is Jiraiya.

“Hey pervert. I’m at the friend house. Looks like I’ll be crashing in for tonight since the traffic is going to be bad and not to mention the transportation is going to be stopped.” Naruto said in a fact tone. In the beginning, he thought that he was planning to say at the friend house to sleepover but Karin sudden invite surprise him but luckily he text his phone to his friend to let him know beforehand.

“A friend? Naruto, is it a girl?” Jiraiya said on the line with a smirk.

Naruto sighed. Every time, he went to a friend place, his godfather always asks this same question. Most answer he response to him is no but today is not it.

“Yes, pervert.” Naruto said in a defeated tone. Just then he heard footsteps coming and made a quick goodbye to his godfather to ignore the shout from his phone to see Karin bring it grapes on the plate. Once they are done eating, they beginning to talk.

“So Karin, are you seeing someone?” Naruto said while patting his stomach showing that he is full.

Her silence scared him. He worried that she was offended by the question to realize that this is their first time meeting, or that maybe she found him ridiculous to ask her such a private thing. His shoulder's relaxed when she finally responded.

“No. Since the students making fun of me of my perfects grades and my looks, no boys will even come near me.” Karin said as her head look on the floor and didn’t look at Naruto direction. The teases, the taunting really getting to her through-out the school years. Her parents didn’t help much at all due to their jobs and their income issue leaving Karin to fend to herself since she has no one to talk to. She snapped her thought out as she felt an arm around her to see Naruto hugged her on one side and his expression some kind of understanding. She didn’t have the heart to push him away since no one have comfort like this before.

“I understand where you are going through. I don’t have many friends at first but then I use the pranks to gain some attention and it’s worked even though I get scowled by the teachers and my guardian. Since then I have a lot of friends and I haven’t been on prank on anyone except on special thing.”

Naruto moved his arm away to see that Karin is now paying attention to him. He slowly takes off her glasses, placing them on the table to show her exotic ruby eyes and a bit moister with it. It’s appears that she was close to comes in tears.

“Since I’m here, I could introduce you to my friends and I’m sure that they will get to know you. They won’t judge you on your appearances and I can promise you tha-”

Naruto was cut off as Karin planted her lips to him in such a quick move.

Lemon

Naruto gasped when Karin suddenly kissed him out of nowhere. He won’t deny that she was beautiful when he first saw her. It’s also didn’t help when her clothes are hugging tight on her body from before and now. He blinks a few more to see her eyes closed but a few tears dropping away. He could understand that her feelings are all over the place since she told him her situation. He would gladly help her through thick and thin but now, he might as well enjoy this as he closed his eyes to return the kiss.

Karin smiled when she can feel him kissed her back knowing how lonely she gets.
Naruto smiled as he felt Karin's tongue beat him back into his mouth he didn't know why but he could feel his sexual desire and right now he couldn't say no knowingly that Karin made the first unsuspected move after all.

Pulling back Karin tugged on Naruto's bottom lip as they released their lip lock.

“Naruto…I want you to take me tonight.” Karin said huskily and turning around and taking a hold of Naruto's hand.

“Ok if you are sure.” Naruto said staring at Karin's ass as she moved her hips sideway and lead Naruto to her bed.

“Yes, it’s my first time doing this.” Karin said with a sexy grin and proceeded to pushed Naruto onto the bed so he landed on his back.

As soon as he felt his back hit the bed, Naruto grabbed Karin's waist and pulled her down into a heated kiss.

Karin moaned into the kiss and felt Naruto's tongue seeking permission to enter her mouth and being turned on as she was, there was no way she was going to say no. She is going to enjoyed this. And thank god that she learn this stuff from her porn book hiding somewhere in her room

Karin however despite enjoying the kisses needed more and began to tug on Naruto's shirt, getting the message Naruto broke from the kiss and quickly removed his shirt and threw it away.

Naruto smiled as he saw Karin staring with a heavy blush; grinning to himself he grabbed Karin and flipped her over so he was on top.

The red haired girl gasped when she felt Naruto pin her but soon moaned when she felt him start laying kisses on her neck.

“See something you like Karin.” Naruto whispered while lightly biting Karin's earlobe and gently massaging her breasts with his hands through her top.

“A-Ah-Naruto…” Karin moaned biting her lips at the pleasure Naruto was giving her, Naruto smiled and made his way back to Karin's face and kissing her on the lips to which she gladly returned while wrapping her arms around Naruto's back.

Naruto gasped at Karin however when he felt the red haired girl spin them around again and grin.

Slowly pulling herself back Karin lifted her body up however she stayed straddling and moved her hands all around Naruto's bare chest.

“Hmm…I do Naruto, but there's something else I want to see” Karin spoke sexually while raking her hands towards Naruto's jeans.

Naruto moaned as he felt Karin rubbed his penis through his clothing. That action made Naruto realized that where this is going but didn’t have the guts to say no since he want to experience this even though this is his first time as well.

“These have to go Naruto.” Karin said tugging on his pants and then standing up.
Smiling Naruto helped Karin take off his pants leaving him in only his boxer shorts, grinning Naruto propped himself onto his elbows.

“Why am I the only one almost naked? It’s only fair that it’s your turn.” Naruto said smiling as Karin threw Naruto's pants next to his shirt turning around Karin slowly take the top over her head showing that she didn’t wear her bra and dropped it on the floor and her shorts pulled it down with it leaving her in a pair of red panties.

“Damn that's hot” Naruto groaned as he felt his dick harden at the sight of Karin's curves.

Karin smiled and faced Naruto again and pulled him forwards so his legs were hanging off the bed carefully Karin knelt between Naruto's legs and placed her hand on Naruto's penis.

“These have to go for me to be able to give you a treat Naruto” Karin whispered in lust and proceeded to lower Naruto's boxer shorts and threw them away.

“Oh my…you are big.” Karin asked in shock as she stared at Naruto's penis.
“Yeah I know.” Naruto said in embarrassed.

“Oh well…more for me.” Karin mumbled as Naruto groaned out as he felt Karin's breath on his dick. Smiling Karin lightly wrapped her hand around Naruto's penis and gave him a light squeeze. She playfully giving him a tug and lowering her head to place a kiss on the mushroom shaped head.

Naruto gripped the sheets when he felt Karin's lips touch his cock, he moaned again when he felt Karin place another kiss on the head of his cock and let her lips linger a little longer.

Karin smiled as she saw Naruto looking tense and reaching down with her hands she cupped Naruto's balls and started to massage them as she bobbed her head down again this time letting the head of his penis part her lips.

“Mhmm” Karin moaned as she tasted Naruto quickly sending her tongue out Karin licked the underside of the head repeatedly before swirling her tongue around the head.

Naruto moaned as he felt the pleasure of Karin licking his cock and the pleasure of her hands massaging his balls, however he did groan in disappointment when Karin pulled her head back letting his dick fall from her lips.

Immediately however he sighed in content when he felt one of the hands massaging his balls move to wrap around the base of his cock.

Karin smiled as she leaned her head down again and licked the pre cum off Naruto's dick then letting the head back into her mouth and suck it.

Slowly Karin lowered her head further onto Naruto's dick letting him further and further into her mouth until his cock hit the back of her throat, Naruto smiled as he put his hands into Karin's hair and helped her lift her head back up however he was surprised though when she dived her head straight back down bobbing up and down.

With the feeling of Karin massaging his testicles with one hand and her mouth on his dick sucking and licking it wasn't long until Naruto felt the urge to cum and knowing some girls didn't like swallowing cum Naruto did his best to warn her.

“K-karin…I'm going to cum.” Karin however tightened her lips around his manhood and bobbed her head faster.

“Arghh” Naruto moaned as he arched his back and released the orgasm Karin had sucked him too.
Karin smiled as she felt blast after blast of Naruto's cum land in her mouth, after she was certain he had stopped cumming she slowly released Naruto's dick out of her mouth, swallowing the cum Naruto gave her Karin found herself moaning again at Naruto's taste. It’s taste strange but she is not complaining.

“W-wow that was amazing.” Naruto panted out.

“It’s taste strange but I’m not complaining.” Karin said grasping his dick again and licking away any excess cum, she gasped however when she felt herself thrown onto to bed.
“You are getting too much fun and now it’s my turn” Naruto said as he hovered over Karin, kissing her neck and slowly moved down and worked on her sizable and perky breasts.

Karin moaned when she felt Naruto place his mouth on her breast and suck her nipple while his hands playfully massaged the other.

“Ah-Naruto.” Karin moaned as she raked her fingers through Naruto's blonde hair, while he nipped on her nipple making it hard.

Slowly again Naruto started placing kisses down Karin's body from her stomach all the way down to her panties.

“Times for these to go.” Naruto said pulling off Karin's panties and throwing them across the room.

Smiling as he saw Karin fully revealed Naruto leaned down and licked the inside of her thigh and made his way to her pussy.

Placing his hands on her hips Naruto stuck his tongue out parting the lips to her pussy; enjoying the sweet taste Naruto proceeded to layer his tongue all around Karin's slit.

Karin arched her back and moaned as she felt Naruto lick her she was sweating heavily and he wasn't making it any easier by cupping her ass and circling his tongue in her pussy.

“Oh…oh Naruto keep going I'm almost there” Karin moaned raking her hands through his hair again.

Naruto smiled as heard the red haired girl moan quickly placing his lips on a small nub Naruto grinned at Karin's increase on panting, rolling her clit around Naruto smiled when he heard Karin shout.

“NARUTOOO” Karin screamed tugging on Naruto's hair as she felt an orgasm hit her.

Naruto lapped up all of Karin's juices as the girl continued to shake in bliss after her orgasm.

Giving one last upward lick to Karin's pussy Naruto proceeded to kiss his way up Karin's body until he met her lips once again meeting in a heated kiss.

Pulling away from the kiss again and looking down Naruto playfully rubbed his penis against Karin's pussy making her moan and arch her back in pleasure.

“Are you sure?” Naruto said in worried looking into Karin's eyes, the girl simply nodded her head with a smile. This is going to hurt knowing that this is her first time.

Naruto grunted slightly when he began to enter Karin. She was tight and extremely warm inside and the further he went in he could hear her breathing turning into scream, finally sheathing himself inside her Naruto stayed still and allowed her to become accustomed to his size seeing her blood came out of her pussy stating that he broke through her hymen. She is now officially a woman.

Karin screams turn into a moan even though she was is pain at Naruto being inside her. Seeing this Naruto kissed her softly cheeks knowing that he won’t go on until she gives a sign to continue on.

“You can move now Naruto.” Karin said moaning in bliss knowing that she is ready.
Naruto nodded and began to slowly move his hips backwards and forwards sending extreme pleasure to both Naruto and Karin at the feeling of his dick rubbing the insides of Karin.
“H-Harder” Karin moaned into Naruto's ear as she wrapped her arms around his neck, Naruto nodded and began to speed up and pound Karin harder.

The sounds of moaning and skin hitting skin were the only sounds that could be heard from Karin's room as he continued to thrust into Karin.

After 15 minutes of the same position, Naruto pulled out and turned Karin around, getting the idea Karin got on her knees buried her face into a pillow.

Naruto smiled at Karin positioning it was clear that she liked a dominant one but at times she could be cute and playfully sexy.

Placing both his hands on her ass, Naruto penetrated her again and started to thrust repeatedly into Karin.

“Oh…that feels so good Naruto.” Karin moaned into the pillow as she felt Naruto slam into her, she could feel another orgasm approaching and if by the panting and groaning Naruto was doing she could tell he was close to.

“Karin…I'm close” Naruto mumbled as he leaned down and massaged Karin's breasts.
“Oh me too…cum inside” Karin whimpered at the feeling of Naruto pinching her nipples and the pleasure of him constantly pounding in and out of her.

Naruto tightly closed his eyes and pushed himself as deep as he could into Karin and released himself.

Karin smiled when she felt Naruto's cum enter, the feeling of her womb being filled up sent her into an orgasm.

Lemon End

Naruto laid on Karin's back for a couple of seconds before rolling off and landing next to her on his back closely followed by Karin as she laid her chin on his chest.

“Wow…for someone who doesn’t have friends, you are something else in the bed.” Naruto said panting slightly, Karin chuckle at his words and let her hand drift to his manhood again where she slowly started stroking him.

“It's not over yet Naruto, I’m not tired and I can keep going. Don’t fall asleep yet.” Karin said positioning herself over Naruto and dropping onto him.

Naruto could only moan as it seemed it was going to be an extremely long and pleasurable night.

In the Next Morning

Naruto groaned tiredly as he slowly woke up from what he would call an excellent night looking to his right he found the reason why he had such an excellent night. He smiled at the sight of Karin using his chest as a pillow. He was very surprise that the red head did a number on him last night. Who knew that the geeky girl turn into a sex fiend, not that Naruto minded. If his godfather heard about this, he will never hear the end of it and maybe he might place this on his books. Nonetheless, he was still glad that he have met her and the last night activates will be forever in his young life. It’s a good thing that they have no school tomorrow so that he can take a breather.

A soft moan broke him out of his thoughts as he saw Karin slowly waking up she looked up at him and smiled before leaning in and giving him a quick kiss on the lips once she pulled back she raked Naruto's chest lightly with her finger before sitting up letting the cover fall off her revealing her bare skin to Naruto.

“About last night…uh…” Karin said in shudder, doesn’t know where to start since it’s mostly her action did the deed. Seeing where this is going, Naruto sitting up as well and next to her.

“I’ll admit, I did not see that coming. But I’m not mad at you or anything.” Naruto said in sincerely.

Karin sighed in relief and didn’t tell him that having sex is mostly the cause of her fellow female classmate taking about the subject that made her jumped the gun since she laid eyes on him. But she will tell him about it later.

Standing up, she picks up the clothes and putting it in and Naruto follow along.
After they are both dressed up, both Karin and Naruto head out the door and buy some breakfast. During the walk, Naruto voice his concern about his sperm in her womb after their sex but Karin reassure him that she have taking contraception pills last night. Naruto show some relief that he fear that he may have put her in pregnancy too soon if that was the case since they are so young. However, he will promise her if that were to happened in the near future, he will take full responsibility leaving Karin to blush to show some conviction in his voice.

After the purchase of the breakfast and eating, both headed back to her home leaving them in the front door. Karin suddenly hugged Naruto who in return did the same.

“Thank you for meeting you yesterday. You made me happy. Not only you are now my friend, I was hoping that I could be your girlfriend.” She said in whisper to his ear.

“You are welcome. And I’ll gladly be your boyfriend to get to know your better.” Naruto said as he giving her a slow heated kiss in which Karin was more than happy to return.

With that said, Naruto left leaving Karin alone to see his figure moving until it’s gone. She went to her home and close the front door behind her knowing that this is greatest of her life.

The End
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Comments: 31

Revolucci [2014-06-28 06:23:57 +0000 UTC]

this wasnt half bad.. you could polish up your english grammar 
but you kept my attention and i wanted to keep reading so that's good..

keep it up.. have a great weekend

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-06-29 08:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah and do you do fanfiction?

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Revolucci In reply to CRed1988 [2014-07-03 01:56:42 +0000 UTC]

no i dont write my own fanfiction.. i'm no good at writing story's

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-07-03 02:53:04 +0000 UTC]

awwwww

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Revolucci In reply to CRed1988 [2014-07-04 03:34:29 +0000 UTC]

but i do make collages and i take snapshots from movies and series
and try to do some Fan art when i can

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-07-04 07:51:33 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Revolucci In reply to CRed1988 [2014-07-08 04:27:19 +0000 UTC]

if you want to take a look at my gallery that would be appreciated

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-07-08 07:33:32 +0000 UTC]

we'll see

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Revolucci In reply to CRed1988 [2014-07-11 02:50:09 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-07-11 14:22:39 +0000 UTC]

yep

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Revolucci In reply to CRed1988 [2014-07-15 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]

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CRed1988 In reply to Revolucci [2014-07-15 07:26:58 +0000 UTC]

^^

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gymnosophist [2013-12-26 04:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Just catching up here. Glad I didn't miss this...

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CRed1988 In reply to gymnosophist [2013-12-26 05:07:43 +0000 UTC]

hahaha

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gymnosophist In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-26 05:45:55 +0000 UTC]

^ ^  ^ ^ lol

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rosey996 [2013-12-14 11:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-14 20:45:26 +0000 UTC]

yea thanks

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-15 00:34:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

I really like the story. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-15 01:40:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-15 01:48:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-15 02:02:31 +0000 UTC]

What do you think of the story?

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-15 02:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting.

I love the detail and scene setting. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-15 02:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Have you go to fanfiction.net before?

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-15 04:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I have. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-15 10:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Then let me ask you this, think you can help me in my summary?

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-16 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]

I'll try. ^^ 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-16 03:22:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-16 06:07:47 +0000 UTC]

No prob. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-16 06:26:19 +0000 UTC]

then i'll be waiting.

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rosey996 In reply to CRed1988 [2013-12-16 06:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Alright. 

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CRed1988 In reply to rosey996 [2013-12-16 07:20:20 +0000 UTC]

^^

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