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CreepECrawlyMan — Why Did You Go?- Pg 2 by-nc-nd

Published: 2011-04-13 23:22:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 2865; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 24
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Description Another epic page of Why Did You Go?

I'm......mixed about this page. I like how I FINALLY mastered text boxes (THANK YOU RULER TRIANGLE!!! ).

However, I'm upset about how BAD Baljeet looks! His teenage version is terribly shaded and him in the fourth panel looks incredibly awkward to me. O.o Also, I think the big "'Sup?" that Adrian says pretty much killed the drama and seriousness of this comic. >.<

I do like Baljeet screaming down there. LOL!

SPANISH!

Adrian: (Monolgue) Baljeet Rai. Se ve como un simple vecino nerd con gran inteligencia y buena pinta... Pero no es nada más que un tonto.Recuerdo nuestro primer encuentro. Fue en la escuela secundaria y el profesor me envió a mi lugar por el primer día, ¿fue el destino que mi asiento estuviera al lado de "Tú-sabes-quien"?

Baljeet: Hola.

Adrian: (Monolgue)Él era... Ok, como un niño. Tímido, amable, pequeño y un poco lindo, claro está.
Sin embargo, él fue un hardcore y dudé que él pasaría el tiempo con alguien como yo.

Y con eso, yo solo respondí...

Adrian: (Story) ¿Qué hay? (Monolgue)Después de eso, basicamente nos ignoramos el uno al otro...

Nunca supe que nosotros teníamos más que una conección juntos... Hasta que...

Translation by: ~Dawnll

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Phinanie [2011-04-14 23:43:39 +0000 UTC]

*covers ears* Ow. Was that really nessarry Baljeet?

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keyblademaster113 [2011-04-14 22:14:39 +0000 UTC]

I love the "Sup?" that Adrian gives!

Awesome page!

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Pinky1babe [2011-04-14 18:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Looks interesting, great work! .

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Pinky1babe [2011-04-14 18:39:24 +0000 UTC]

X3

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InsaneSamantha [2011-04-14 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]

great work - love it

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to InsaneSamantha [2011-04-14 15:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Terrytoon [2011-04-14 03:40:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm diggin' the second page here bro I really like seeing how Baljeet and Adrian first meeting each other and Baljeet screaming at the end looks hilarious lol Awesome job

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Terrytoon [2011-04-14 03:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Terrytoon In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 03:48:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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NanyHoney011 [2011-04-14 02:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Love Baljeet in the 3rd and last pannell! 8333333
eet's just price less!

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to NanyHoney011 [2011-04-14 02:25:26 +0000 UTC]

XD

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NanyHoney011 In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

;DDD

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Zeroragnarok [2011-04-14 01:37:23 +0000 UTC]

wow, do you translate in spanish, thanks.

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Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 01:20:10 +0000 UTC]

What are you talking about?? Nothing about this page is wrong! ^/////^ Baljeet~

Why is he screaming?? Nuuu~ *Huggles him.*

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 01:57:24 +0000 UTC]

The shading's all......stupid. -.-

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 03:52:34 +0000 UTC]

It is not! D:

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is!

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 14:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Creep E... =< I think it's perfect!

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

I dunno.....it's not as good as yours....>.<

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 15:39:01 +0000 UTC]

PSH! I don't shade in mine! Yours has emotion and awesome narrative. If I drew comics HALF as well as you did, I'd probably do it more!

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 15:41:39 +0000 UTC]

What about "The Deal With Dances", your masterpiece of a comic?

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 15:47:28 +0000 UTC]

That was a piece of crap. That was when I first started drawing Phineas and Ferb, so they sucked SO bad. I'm not being negative, either. I look at that to see how far I've come.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 15:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. I like the pages when you shaded the dark which was very impressive to me. I suck at shading all to together because I tend to make them too dark or light.

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 16:03:19 +0000 UTC]

That was just me scratching at the paper 'til it looked dark. >.< It was no amount of skill, I promise you.

Creep E, I envy you... I really do. Don't say your stuff sucks because I look up to it.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 16:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Even so.....


I envy YOU and I don't like it when you put down on your stuff either.

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 16:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Then maybe we should just agree now to put ourselves down?

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 16:34:44 +0000 UTC]

.....whut?

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 16:50:22 +0000 UTC]

not** NOT to put ourselves.. down. GAH, I typo a lot. Q^Q

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-14 18:39:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah.....

Great idea. :3

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Taon-the-Chosen In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-15 02:01:14 +0000 UTC]

I hope so.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Taon-the-Chosen [2011-04-15 02:22:36 +0000 UTC]

It mostly likely is.

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Dawnll [2011-04-14 00:43:48 +0000 UTC]

oh... I really like this comic

SPANISH:
Adrian's Monologue:

Baljeet Rai. Se ve como un simple vecino nerd con gran inteligencia y buena pinta... Pero no es nada más que un tonto.

Recuerdo nuestro primer encuentro. Fue en la escuela secundaria y el profesor me envió a mi lugar por el primer día, ¿fue el destino que mi asiento estuviera al lado de "Tú-sabes-quien"?

Baljeet: Hola

Adrian's monologue:

Él era... Ok, como un niño. Tímido, amable, pequeño y un poco lindo, claro está.
Sin embargo, él fue un hardcore y dudé que él pasaría el tiempo con alguien como yo.

Y con eso, yo solo respondí...

Adrian: ¿Qué hay?

Después de eso, basicamente nos ignoramos el uno al otro...

Nunca supe que nosotros teníamos más que una conección juntos... Hasta que...

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Dawnll [2011-04-14 00:45:31 +0000 UTC]

YAY! X3

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Extrani-Rain [2011-04-14 00:43:21 +0000 UTC]

*screams like a crazed fangirl*

It's PAGE 2!!! <3333

"I never knew we'd have more of a connection together until...AHHH!" xDDDDD

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Extrani-Rain [2011-04-14 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

8D

SPLEE!

Ah, my favorite part. XXDDD

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Extrani-Rain In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 21:04:29 +0000 UTC]





xDDD It just made me smirk so much <3333

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Linariel [2011-04-13 23:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Sup Ahhh!! I could definitely see that as his first reaction. This is great I cracked up reading that part. It was a little downcast but then bam that showed up

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Linariel [2011-04-13 23:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, at least that's what I'm going for. :3

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Linariel In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-14 00:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Which is rockin it's the way a lot more writers should do their plot. True downcast and angst is interesting but a little bit of humor helps lighten the mood.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Linariel [2011-04-14 00:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. :3

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jaqe96 [2011-04-13 23:45:14 +0000 UTC]

cool!!

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Mattpwnsall [2011-04-13 23:40:00 +0000 UTC]

VERY nice page, man!

Its SO cool!

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cooltee100 [2011-04-13 23:38:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the scream too. :3

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Melty94 [2011-04-13 23:34:34 +0000 UTC]

this is SO awesome! 8dDDDDDDD

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Melty94 [2011-04-13 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU! X3

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Melty94 In reply to CreepECrawlyMan [2011-04-13 23:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the sup. It's very adrian C:.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to Melty94 [2011-04-13 23:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Awww! X3

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Skullgal94 [2011-04-13 23:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, nice.

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JimCarreyDude19 [2011-04-13 23:30:05 +0000 UTC]

I like Baljeet's expression in the last panel.

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CreepECrawlyMan In reply to JimCarreyDude19 [2011-04-13 23:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Something I'm proud about. :3

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