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Crepesculum — The Glass Floor
Published: 2007-04-12 00:51:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description A door without a handle
That has a deadbolt
It’s the only solution
When the world crumbles

A name is written in the ash
Untouched on the old stairs
Little light flickers in the dark
To guide on the path to the dead

Death speaks in tongues
Unheard by the unaccustomed
A glass window to the obvious
Cracking underfoot the weighted

The pressure is intense
The summit before the fall
Is defying gravity with smiles
As the impact is expected

A basement that’s not what it appears
Leaves victims disappointed in a chill
Emptiness and stagnant air within
The beauty is only worth face value

There’s a story to everything
And there’s never an act without a curtain close
Some may never have an encore
But it doesn’t mean it wasn’t worth the time

~Britt
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Comments: 11

xXSmiling-KittenXx [2007-07-08 02:15:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow I adore this. o_o;

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Crepesculum In reply to xXSmiling-KittenXx [2007-07-08 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, for the fave and the comment. I'm glad you like it and I appreciate it ^.^

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xXSmiling-KittenXx In reply to Crepesculum [2007-07-08 02:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. This was a wonderful piece of work.

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Summatrah [2007-04-12 07:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Not bad again
Last paragraph is best

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Crepesculum In reply to Summatrah [2007-04-16 22:58:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^.^
Yea, I like the last too, and the line about death speaking in tongues hehe ^.^

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Fae-Puppy [2007-04-12 02:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Again... wow... Possibly one of my favorites of yours, if I must play that game....

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Crepesculum In reply to Fae-Puppy [2007-04-16 22:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it ^.^

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Azul-Engel [2007-04-12 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I read it in Canadia

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Crepesculum In reply to Azul-Engel [2007-04-14 16:17:49 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Thank you sis ^.^

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Makispero [2007-04-12 01:12:15 +0000 UTC]

i remember this. a unique poem showing the stretch of the human mind.

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Crepesculum In reply to Makispero [2007-04-12 21:47:01 +0000 UTC]

I imagine it does. It was just random. I actually just don't like it. SO forced.

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