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Published: 2003-12-30 21:08:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description Sweet little candy,
How well you look today,
Sitting there so shiny,
In the hot summer day,
Glittering strands of caramel,
Smooth white chocolate shell,
How your sweetness enfolds about me,
As I press you to my lips,
Sweet little candy,
How small you look today,
Sitting there so quietly,
Thinking the day away,
Perfect is your icing,
Perfect is your smell,
Perfect is your sweet touch,
That I know so well,
Sweet little candy,
How lovely you look today,
Just sitting there so sweetly,
Always looking my way.
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Comments: 5

surprise-me-stock [2004-07-24 02:02:21 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful... just well perfect...

candy

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crescentlady In reply to surprise-me-stock [2004-07-27 13:32:34 +0000 UTC]

*flustered* Thankies!

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Alyvareashia [2003-12-31 15:50:50 +0000 UTC]

That's so nice the imagery is great don't you just love those moments when the perfect thing just seems to pop out of nowhere...I need that to happen more often

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crescentlady In reply to Alyvareashia [2004-01-01 05:06:05 +0000 UTC]

I adore moments like those. The best poetry in the world comes out on the spur of the moment. ^^

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hybred [2003-12-31 05:30:00 +0000 UTC]

that's really good! i wish i could write poetry..
and it got published in a book? that's amazing!

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