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CrescentMoon — The Gift of Luna

Published: 2004-05-15 23:28:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 4931; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 336
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Description “I woke up in a dark place, darker than any badger´s burrow; almost as dark as the night sky, but no stars where glowing in my prison. I smelt the air, it was a nice feeling, but I couldn´t recognize the flower or tree that smelt that way. I listened, but at my fear only silence could laugh. I looked, and my gaze was eaten by the deepness of the void.”
“I ran in fear; for the only thing that was real and familiar in that nightmare was the floor under my paws. A rocky floor, irregular… and as I realized, the floor started to glow with a pale light, like the one you sometimes can feel, but not see, on a New Moon. Then I watched my surroundings, but there were no walls to stop me. Nothing to tell me where I was.”
“I smelt again, trying to catch the smell of my packmates; but only the mysterious flower´s fragrance met my nose.”
“Then I rose my face to the sky, looking for my lady shining up there, giving me a clue that I was in the real world, that this wasn´t the other side. My breath turned quicker when I thought She wasn´t there; but I found her. Luna was almost on the floor, so I turned and ran towards her direction to ask her. She was far, so I ran for a long time.”
When I thought I was close enough to howl and make her listen, I stopped suddenly: I found a wall. And through the wall´s window I was seeing the Moon, my lady. The round wall´s window was made of colored glass, like in human´s big houses of meeting, where they represent their gods. It represented a wolf howling in a blue sky, and the phases of the Moon were represented as well. I was confused, now I really thought I had died during the night, and gone to Luna´s chamber to wait for my pack to travel togheter until the end of times.”
“But the elders never taught me about this place. Luna was supposed to come and take my soul from my dead body after death. I looked at her shining round surface again, but she wasn´t there. I whined like a puppy, in absolute fear for my lady was not there anymore to protect my poor lost soul. I howled and cried, and then realized a weak light on my back. I turned my head from the window´s sight, to meet a woman.”
“She was pale and beautiful like the winter snow, with her long shining hair glowing like liquid silver, almost floating. Her smile touched my heart and kissed my soul, like the sun after a cold night. Her hands we holding a small Crescent Moon, that she offered to me. I had never seen her in my life, yet I knew, deep inside, that she was our lady. Legends about Luna offering grey wolves –like me!- to be her priests, the alpha telling mom I was the first grey wolf born in the pack in 100 years, the memory of the first Moon seen in the same day of my birth: it was crescent, magic and beautiful… all that came suddenly into my head. She smiled again; and without words she asked me again. I watched her cold glow, an eerie glow that didn´t give light to my fur or to the floor, just to her. And I knew I wanted to serve her forever, that I wanted to be a priest, but I cried for I knew no longer I could be a normal wolf, that I must leave my pack, and look for the others: the Changers, and become one of them.”
“Yes, I cried.”
“Because in the moment I licked her hands, the little shining moon she was holding melt with me, and I was no longer a wolf. Wolves cannot cry, but humans can, and Changers too. She told me not to suffer, not to cry, not to be sad; because the gift she gave me was the best bless she could offer to our people. The gift to talk with the spirits, to see what others can´t see, and to protect the soul of our kind. She told me to go and use it well. My desire to be with her was weaker than my desire to serve her, so I left that place, following the moonbeam she created for me. She took my first tears and kept them, saying she would return them back in times of need, because it is known wolf´s tears never fall in vain.”

“I woke up.”


This is a short story I created for my character Crescent. Maybe I will write more as I do more drawings about her, or members of her pack, or the story -some of them could be other deviant´s characters, I have a few candidates in mind that maybe I will ask in the future ^__^. Writing it was harder than I thought it would be! If I keep interest in the story maybe I could write something more seriously and create a mini-world were to base my drawings. Anyway, I hope you like it.
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Comments: 46

Sinnykinz [2004-11-30 03:30:07 +0000 UTC]

lmao... Its luberly... but I think its funny because my real life name is Luna

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Daisuke-is-mine [2004-11-25 18:20:33 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!

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kogathewolf [2004-11-24 03:52:18 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww im crying im inspired to write my own story. though i think i probably wont get to it

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Nashoba-Hostina [2004-11-23 18:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow... nifty stuff. I lve the stained glass-like background.

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keiko32 [2004-11-23 16:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Ay, que bonitoooooooooooooooooooo! El dibujo es precioso, que belleza de lobito, y me encanta como te salio la luna que lleva la chica en las manos, tan brillante.

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shadow-piper [2004-11-23 07:39:41 +0000 UTC]

ooooh, thats soo purty.

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cloudstar-wolf [2004-11-23 06:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Holy holy holy... (explicitives)..... wow. I love the picture and the story is amazing. So much feeling to it. It's something that you just wish to ... roll around in. *smile*

Thank you for sharing this. Keep it comin'?

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WildeRavan [2004-11-22 22:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Truely Amazing. I really like this one. The detail and the way it shines is just spectacular.

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moonflicker [2004-11-22 21:36:25 +0000 UTC]

This would make an awesome book that I'd definately buy! ^-^

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BlackWolf-Embers [2004-11-22 21:30:40 +0000 UTC]

wow very beautiful i really love the glows in the hair and the crescent.

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Irwen [2004-11-22 19:55:35 +0000 UTC]

wooooooow que chuladaaaa *o*

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Patryn-Sartan [2004-11-22 17:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous!

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a-gu [2004-11-22 16:06:26 +0000 UTC]

beautifule work i love the coolors mruuu XD I love your arts !!!

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ShadoDeathWeeper [2004-08-25 11:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Wondeful job, its beautiful!

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Ebonlupus [2004-06-14 10:46:03 +0000 UTC]

I really love the Wolf in this drawing. *wags*

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vaia [2004-06-10 11:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful
She's so etherial!
Wonderful colors

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SnapesGem [2004-06-06 07:19:10 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous! lovely work!

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Oel [2004-05-25 21:31:11 +0000 UTC]

oh wow, I like this alot! Great job Crescent!

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Alakatarie [2004-05-22 22:24:08 +0000 UTC]

That's very beautiful. I love the silverish color to the girl, and the coloring to everything else.

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Ixindria [2004-05-21 14:53:36 +0000 UTC]

oh wow, the girl is just... i love the colors of her, the silver and white. It makes her look so beautiful and magical

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musicala10 [2004-05-17 19:38:51 +0000 UTC]

oh i love the background and the colors ^_^ her feet look a bit odd though O_o

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NightTracker [2004-05-17 16:36:18 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful! Case closed end of story! I -love- the color you chose for this.. and the meaning behind it, the story is wonderful. awsome job, yes.

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Lady-Rose [2004-05-17 14:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Me love this is fav. I love the short story too sooooooooo good! I for the pic and story!

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moonduster [2004-05-16 21:52:02 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful drawing, and I loved the story too! You could write a novel based on that!

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iduck [2004-05-16 20:32:17 +0000 UTC]

The coloring turned out fantastic! The stained glass effect turned out lovely. Is that a wolf howling in the back there? It looks a bit awkward since you can only see it's mouth. But that's the only crit I have. That hair is gorgeous

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Orena [2004-05-16 15:41:42 +0000 UTC]

The colouring on the wolf is great and I like the person's hair. Also, I liked your story.

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snapthefox [2004-05-16 15:14:54 +0000 UTC]

*nods solemnly in awe* awesome!... just beautiful!

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fleetfoot [2004-05-16 14:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Absolutley wonderful. This looks even better colored!
I might want to suggest that you work on drawing paws.. But apart from that, perfect
I really like how you managed to color in that mosaic (sp?) behind her. What did you use?

Again.

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CrescentMoon In reply to fleetfoot [2004-05-16 14:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Same as for the wolf: I used pencils and colored pencils. Thanks for the comment.

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nellis-eketorp [2004-05-16 10:16:26 +0000 UTC]

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Bhryn [2004-05-16 09:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous, your talent seems to grow with each passing piece of art!

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DarkerSideoftheMoon [2004-05-16 03:54:26 +0000 UTC]

dude, awesome!! this is really good!

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JeweledAniu [2004-05-16 03:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! How did you color this? It looks like marker with some PhotoShop editing, if I'm not mistaken. Luna looks beautiful and mystical! Great! Wanna know something cool? I was listening to this song that seemed to fit your pic and your story while I was looking at/reading it. It had a mystiacl kind of eerie beat that sounded like it came from the forest or something. It was just a random Techno song!!! It was really neat though!!!!!!!!!!

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CrescentMoon In reply to JeweledAniu [2004-05-16 08:52:28 +0000 UTC]

What happened with the song is just too curious! Thanks for the comment and fave! I colored this with pencils and watercolor pencils, and pastels for Luna. I used photoshop to darken more the background only.

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JeweledAniu In reply to CrescentMoon [2004-05-18 03:05:57 +0000 UTC]

VERY COOL! Luna, especialy her hair, looks like it was colored in PS! WOW! GREAT JOB!

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Dhaem17 [2004-05-16 03:22:32 +0000 UTC]

*Dhaem17 se arrodilla y comienza a hacer alabanzas*

Geniales el dibujo y la historia, simplemente geniales

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Streakychan [2004-05-16 02:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Just... I'm in awe. The phases of the moon, the wolf's coloring, the stained glass, this is all beautifully done. The lack of outlines on her hair makes it seem very free and flowing, and all the anatomy is right on target.

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Star-estz [2004-05-16 01:43:16 +0000 UTC]

-eyes pop out of head- O___O -dies-

that... is... absolutely.... AMAZING!! I love her hair, it's so mesmerizing (sp?) and shiny, yet so realistic, it's perfect! this is really a great piece of art -pats the wolf- I'd consider it a masterpiece! you've earned a :+lovefav: from me!

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CrescentMoon In reply to Star-estz [2004-05-16 08:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!! Your comment really made me smile ; and I am too happy to know you like it, because I consider this pic one of my bests too . Thanks!!

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Star-estz In reply to CrescentMoon [2004-05-16 14:32:47 +0000 UTC]

no problem, just keep up the great art!

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Roana [2004-05-16 01:08:14 +0000 UTC]

omg, i love that. the story too! makes me want to write somemore. u might write? cool!!!! that is just so cool...i raelly love it

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Gothic-Dragon [2004-05-16 00:24:42 +0000 UTC]

omg this is soooo beautiful. the silver of her hair is sooo perfect! gosh... absolutely a fave for me!

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Apocalymon [2004-05-16 00:18:36 +0000 UTC]

woow that looks really great

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moonflicker [2004-05-15 23:49:35 +0000 UTC]

:jawdroppping: AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! I loved that. 'Twas so beautiful...::wipes away a tear:: "wolf´s tears never fall in vain..."

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Noe-Izumi [2004-05-15 23:49:34 +0000 UTC]

Que envidia de escribir tan fluidamente en inglesssss ^_^Que hermoso dibujoooooo ^_^

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wielderofthewind [2004-05-15 23:35:12 +0000 UTC]

ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' GORGEOUS! I love the silverish color you did the Luna thing in and the detail...and the wolf....and the dreamcatcher...and everything...*shuts her muzzle and decides to fave it before she makes a further fool out of herself*

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