Comments: 9
LSD-Dreams [2011-01-16 18:04:57 +0000 UTC]
This is super cute~ I like it.
The only thing I would suggest you try to change is the way her chest is drawn... It seems kinda awkward.
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CrimsonPearls In reply to LSD-Dreams [2011-01-24 04:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the advice, I appreciate it ^^
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thesassysim [2011-01-15 17:30:20 +0000 UTC]
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MR-NIK [2011-01-15 03:34:01 +0000 UTC]
The hair, dresser and texture are good.
The upper arms are too long like Seena-Cha said but also, the top of her breast sits awkwardly..
that line that intersects her chest on the top curve of the breast should not be there.
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CrimsonPearls In reply to MR-NIK [2011-01-24 04:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the advice ^^
I think I was trying to make it look like the corset was pressing her chest upward, but looking back on it now it is strange looking. Things never look the same when you're drawing them as they do when you're looking back.
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Seena-Cha [2011-01-13 22:21:43 +0000 UTC]
her elbow is too far out... and other arm on where its down to her side, her elbow is too far down aswell.
measure on where YOUR elbows are, that will help you for when your drawing her anatomy next time.
Also the bust needs alittle work, the other bust is missing.
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CrimsonPearls In reply to Seena-Cha [2011-01-15 00:07:28 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I tend to have that problem.
I draw arms and necks too long.
Thank you for the tip though ^^
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Hydrasis [2011-01-13 08:30:53 +0000 UTC]
this is wonderful x3
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