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CrimsonSummer — Mercy-Chapter 5-Pg 22

Published: 2013-06-29 15:08:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2281; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 13
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Stargazerium [2013-06-29 23:51:00 +0000 UTC]

That's it, Kuga! *is as always looking forward to seeing more*

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KirosRazer [2013-06-29 21:50:38 +0000 UTC]

I loved it! Wow. I love the emotion displayed by Natsuki.
I'm sure Shizuru is blown away by this confession!

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CrimsonSummer In reply to KirosRazer [2013-06-29 23:09:44 +0000 UTC]

natsuki was overwhelmed by her love for shizuru after kissing her lol
What will shizuru do?

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KirosRazer In reply to CrimsonSummer [2013-07-01 14:34:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure in general view:
be surprised but welcome her with open arms.
I do like fanfiction and doujinishi.
You are allowed to go beyond story
in the things we often wonder, with it. ^^

So, I get fascinated with how others write it,
since I too have my own sense of creativity.

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carapau [2013-06-29 20:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Great page again but you have made a grammar mistake on the second frame. It's supposed to be "I'm just a girl you WERE in love with but," 


I know it's not a big deal and people can still get the meaning but it sounds weird and grammar shouldn't get in the way of the perfection of this page  

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CrimsonSummer In reply to carapau [2013-06-29 22:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh yea I've realized, drawing at 2am in the morning didn't help.

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carapau In reply to CrimsonSummer [2013-06-29 23:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I understand. I wouldn't have bothered pointing it out if it was the key element of that speech.  

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CrimsonSummer In reply to carapau [2013-06-30 12:53:53 +0000 UTC]

You should point it out lol, I always make careless mistakes

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georgiapilu [2013-06-29 18:50:00 +0000 UTC]

long time no see! 10x for the update
\m/

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CrimsonSummer In reply to georgiapilu [2013-06-29 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]

10x? And it's only been few days lol

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georgiapilu In reply to CrimsonSummer [2013-06-30 07:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Few days = calamity! \m/
Can't wait the next installment!

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