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CrispyTrumpets — Martin Lomax
Published: 2011-10-10 00:43:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 903; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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A centipede. A beautiful centipede.He crafts it with such precision, such delicate detail. He relishes every moment, taking his time to ensure that his creation is perfect. His life was spent separating, and now he connects. He creates.
His creation is striking, breathtaking beyond all measure. The three have become one, all connected by the innards, front to back. He says they're in pain. They moan and writhe, and I watch. I watch, and I get excited.
I want one of my own.
I am not a doctor. I have never had the courage to harm others, only myself. But after seeing what the surgeon can do, the urge is too strong. I want to hear them moan, I want to see them crawl on their knees, I want to see them feed each other. I'll feed the front, and she will feed the rest. I will watch, and I will get hard, and oh, man alive, the pleasure I'll feel.
I must set to work. I'll gather tools from around the house. I'll watch the surgeon again, over and over, to make sure I can perform the procedure just right. I'll find a closed off area, to keep the pieces until they're joined. Until then, I have the scrapbook. And my dreams.
My centipede. My beautiful centipede.
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the centipede, in a twisted, perverted way, brought colour into his gray dreary life...
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I hate Human Centipede 2. It's too disturbing for me, and Martin is like these toxic fanboys The Rpg Monster talks about in Fandom Files.
Anyway, good poem.
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love this poem
very creative
I liked the sequel
crap actually spewed onto the screen
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yes I watched recently the two first movies
third one was unnecessary
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NO. NO MORE HUMAN CENTIPEDE. I hate that shit so much...the movie, not this. This is actually a pretty good little monologue. You really do have a talent for writing, you know that?
Hey, have you considered writing horror stories? Could be fun, 'specially if you make it as eloquent as this. Just don't make it a bunch of torture-porn-gore-scenes like FunnySawHostelCentipedeSerbianfilmGames. Speaking of which, when did it okay for revulsion to equal fear in a horror movie? Has any modern horror director heard of a little thing called SELF RESTRAINT?!?! (sorry for the rant i'm just sick of seeing torture porn movies come out every year instead of a horror movie that uses an imagination. That's why i'm psyched about the THING TRALALALAAAAAAAAAA!)
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...I fucking LOVE The Human Centipede, both movies, though I was in denial about the second one because I'm aware that no one in the world should enjoy it, because it was the most vile thing. I do NOT call it a horror film, though, it is an exploitation film through and through. There's a difference. Horror films are meant to evoke fear and paranoia, while exploitation is just meant to shock and disgust. They really need to get their shit together about mixing up the two.
BUT ANYWAY, thank youuuu.
I have considered writing horror, but I have more fun writing crime drama. But...this was a fun little drabble. It would be fun if I made it a bit like this, methinks.
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*when did it become okay for revulsion to equal fear...
etc.
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How the fuck did you make the Human fucking Centipede classy you magnificent bastard.
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I'm just that awesome. *Strikes a pose*
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Oh God that's fucking disturbing, but I really liked it. FANFICTION WITH PROPER GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, IMAGINE THAT! <3
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MY GOD, IT'S A FUCKING MIRACLE.
But yeah, I didn't even need to mention the ass-to-mouth portion or anything to be creepy, glad I got that across. *u*
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Oh God do we even wanna know any more about the ass-to-mouth portion.
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...Not really, no. XD
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