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GIFTED TO TheWyvernAndTheFoxEllethwen
"The Maiden"
Gender: Doe
Age: 4 years -Spring of 753-
Breed: :#Fawnlings:
Type: Classic
Build: Light +1 Speed
Height: 9 hh
Colour: Rose Grey Roan Fawn
Genotype: Ee AA ff nRn Gg fwfw
Accessories: n/a
Herd Status: Herd Member
Lineage: Windborne Starter -Point Splinter- +1 experience, +2 speed, +2 stamina
--Dam: Unknown Windborne
--Sire: Unknown Windborne
Siblings: n/a
Mate: n/a
Offspring:
name by stag season of yearAbilities: Wind magic
Fighting Stats:
-Speed: 3 +3 = 7
-Stamina: 2 +2 = 4
-Strength: 1
-Experience: 1 +1 = 2
Magic Stats:
age <5
3/10
age <10
0/20
age 11+
0/30
0/31+
Herb Lore:
age <5
0/10
age <10
0/20
age 11+
0/30
0/31+
Personality: Submissive and timid.
History:
Year 753 of the New Age -Birth to 11 months
Spring: Born at Alba Lake. Mother and Father both masters of wind magic. Summer: Autumn: Winter: Year 754 of the New Age -1 year Spring: Mudslide that kills parents. Summer: Meet Reuel , wanders, meet Rusalka . Autumn: Winter: Close to death, pleads to Molach. Year 755 of the New Age -2 years Spring: Summer: Autumn: Winter: Year 756 of the New Age -3 years Spring: Cliff Side , gathering material for journey to Billabong. Summer: Run in with Tor Autumn: Arrive at Billabong. Run from Tasmanian tiger. Winter: Return from Billabong. Year 757 of the New Age -4 years Spring: Training from Morfindien Summer: Autumn: Winter: Doemance with Étaín Undetermined Plot PointsImages and Roleplays:
Cliff Side +2 magic
Sketch by MoonsongWolf
Ellethwen by LeavingNeverland
Ellethwen by Silverbirch +1 magic
Fawnling breed (c) Ehetere
Original Design: fav.me/d4pkh33
Ref(s): -www.msjnha.org/nature/images/m…
-www.natureartists.com/art/resi…
Time: 15 hrs
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Comments: 47
Is there any chance this gorgeous girl would be open for rut, probably to mule-deer 's Fox? That is, if they agree as well.
I'm trying to get my first Fawnling, and I know there's only a very little bit of time left, so I apologize for the extremely short notice! I would be more than willing to give your art, slots, etc., and to do the proof myself.
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I'm sorry but I no longer own this character.
I also do not appreciate such comments. I don't breed just to breed
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I'm really sorry, I was only wondering. :/
Thank you very much though.
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It's no worries dear, no harm done
It might be better to note people in the future
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Okay, I'll keep that in mind.
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No worries 
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we will have to hammer something out, just note me about it
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First off, such a pretty Fawnling! You did a wonderful job on the anatomy! The head looks a little bit awkward, like it's just stuck on the neck instead of an actual part of the animal. I think that's partly because of the size (just a little too big) and partly because of the lack of shading. The neck should also arch a little bit before it gets to the head. I love the mane, it's so beautiful! The tail looks more like a club instead of the way it's supposed to, it would be better had it been drawn in the same style of mane. Otherwise this is an amazing piece! I really love the simplistic background, it's very nice and doesn't draw attention away from the main subject. Beautiful picture!
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Thank you for the critique! 
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No problem, I hope I wasn't too harsh or anything ;-;
It really is a wonderful piece!
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No not at all 
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Okay, good 
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I love the coloring of the fawnling. The pose that you drew is great looking. The mane is amazing looking with the wind pushing it around. The tail would look just as amazing if the wind was playing with it too. The other thing that looks awkward is the neck at the head join it looks weird, maybe if the head is turned a little to the front it would have looked a little bit better. I love your simpleness of the background, can not wait to see more of the fawnling.
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I really like this. Its very unique, and I love the way its face is made, the shading and the body pose is really cool. Also the name is cool, fits the animal and really the creature gets me wondering about a story! BTW is the tail heavy?
In the future you should so write a background history/story type of thing. I think it would be really interesting to read and also for you to write.
Great piece
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She is actually a role play character and so I will be drawing and adding pieces of her history/story as I draw them. There will be a miniature history blob when I have the chance to update it. For now there is a timeline
As for the tail, yes it's fairly heavy, if you zoom in you can see more details where I tried (and sort of failed) for a swoopy wind blown effect.
Thank you for the critique.
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your ery welcome, it was my pleasure!
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Simple but very effective, showing off all the main parts of the fawnling (the neat lines help create a very nice 'clean' effect) which works well with the slightly more rough ground. The addition of the grey bar in the background also helps in that it breaks up the white space behind which might otherwise have been a bit empty.
The only thing I can think of is the tuft on the tail, which could be made to look more 'hairlike' unless, of course, it's supposed to be that way, I'm no expert on fawnlings.
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Thank you so much for the critique
Ah, I learned the split background trick from the lovely :devbillyboatsgruff: who does it to all her refs.
Yeah ^_^; my hair skills are a total fail work in progress. If you zoom in or download the file you should be able to see the lines/detail in the tail. I tried for an almost swooped back look.
Thanks so much again for the critique, I love it.
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It's a very good trick. I think I'll need to remember than one
Ah, now I see what you mean. I think, it'd work very well with the swooped back look if there was a defined bit that passed by upwards, breaking the shape.
Overall, nicely done.
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This girl is just beautiful, the way you have done her mane tail and feathering is just gorgeous he really just adds to her beauty. Also the lines in this piece just really neat and clean and there are no like loose or rigid ends anywhere. I think it may have ben nice to see her head in more of a 3/4 view but that just my own thoughts! Nothing really to critique, really lovely work
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Thank you so much for the kind words. Perhaps I'll try a 3/4 view on my next reference
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I'm no master on fawnlings but I'll try.
I love how clean the lines are! I can never spend that much time making them neat like that. I also love how soft her expression is. It's a striking pose, in the fact that your eyes are drawn to her face, but it looks soft and feminine. If I had to be really harsh here, I'd say I might have done the tail differently. The mane is so flowy and expersionate, while the tail is just kind of.. there.
But overall, I love the piece, and this fawnling is beautiful c:
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I have a little OCD with my lines so they have to be smooth XD I am really proud of her lines so thank you for that awesome little ego boost
Thank you for mentioning the tail, any suggestions or tutorials that might help me? I had a really hard time with it, especially with the 'swooping' effect i was trying for.
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I probably need to be OCD with my lines.. hmm.
I have a few up on my other account. Maybe read this one: [link] But I'm not 100% how much that will help you with that tail.
I know these are all for photomanipulation, but maybe check some of the tutorials up in these groups: #equimanipulate /#picturesque-equine /#TheEquineStudio
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thank you very much for the info, I'll definitely look into them
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really nice, thin and clear lines! Greatly done (what programm do you use, btw? :'D)
I like the fine details around her eyes and ears
But, in my eyes, the mane looks a bit too much like there'd be quite a strong wind...so maybe trying to draw the hair more floating and less strait would fit better...
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I use sai
And I love that she came across perfectly. She is on a cliff (ze little rocks) and i was aiming for a windy appearance
she uses wind magic so I thought it might be a nice effect.
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thx^^
aah, that's a good reason for this :'D sry...didn't know this :3
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Hey no probs. Its good feedback
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Hi there! I play Morfindien, the king of Windborne. c: Perhaps Mo could give her a couple lessons on wind-magic, or something of the sort?
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i would love to do something like that ^^
i have to finish her current journey but when she returns she will be available for some training roleplay.
I'm on my phome so please pardon the short response
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Yayyy! That sounds perfect. There's no rush at all, I just wanted to run by an excuse to roleplay with you in the future.
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Ah, I have a computer now so we can better plan some things out ^_^
Elle, as I'm sure you've read, really lacks confidence and is totally submissive. She's headed now on a journey to the Billabong to eat the seeds of the original plant that The Storm King ate from. This is gonna help her over come her fear and mental block to using her magic so when she returns from the trip she will need some training
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Elleeee
Perfect! I look forward to this day!
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You're so welcome 
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