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Published: 2018-06-16 03:10:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description just some practice before i do the next commissiooooon
I've not drawn flowers since i was like 8, nevertheless digitally so feel free to give constructive criticism
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RaspberryBoba [2018-06-16 03:39:09 +0000 UTC]

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i'm going to start off by saying that i'm not a professional in the slightest and i have no idea what i'm doing but there are no critiques so i just wanted to add one
i really like the rose one and the lighting/adding of the dew is super pretty so no complaints for that
i like the core of the sunflower a lot and it looks like something i can reach out and touch because of the lighting effects. my nitpick is that the petals look inda
boxy? i don't know how to describe it. making the tips look like the one behind the top one would help and elongating the bottom ones or foreshortening them to make it more clear the flower is at an angle would help but my words aren't law and i think you did a wonderful job regardless of the petal nitpick

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Critterly In reply to RaspberryBoba [2018-06-18 00:04:46 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree with you, thank you so much for taking time to write this ^^

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