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Crockori — First Quest

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Description Leader stallion Einvind crockori.deviantart.com/art/Ho…
My first story quest ever, I'm so excited! I'm not sure how this usually goes, so anyone that have tips or critique on my way of handling quest are warmly welcome to tell me. I should have gone to bed for over an hour ago, but I had too much fun with this Nothing is proof read yet, I'm hitting the hay instead!


It was a beautiful morning, Einvind felt the first warming rays of sunshine hitting him right in the eyes. He didn't have anything at all to do this day so he could just as well sleep in. If he was lucky he might keep dreaming about that apple buffet. He tried closing his eyes, but the bright sun wouldn't let him fall back to sleep. He had been so pleased yesterday when he had found this small open area in the dense forest. It was full of spring flowers (vitsippor, gosh I have no clue what they are called in english) peaking out from the soft moss. He wouldn't stay overnight here again anytime soon, not with this disturbing light. As he was to lazy to get up and take the few steps necessary to get in the shade of the trees, he instread shook his head so that his thick forelock would cover his eyes, shutting out the sun. And he managed to doze off. 

Merely minutes after, Einvind was rudely awakened by heavy hoof beats. He didn't want to get up from the soft warm moss, but he could hear that horse was coming straight towards him. He took a big yawn, and got up on his feet. It was a black stallion, covered in sweat. What on earth made someone gallop through the forest in such a speed this early?

The black stallion asked him to deliver a message to the kings. Einvind didn't even blinked. He had often dreamed of meeting the kings and becoming close to the royals. Words wasn't necessary. He was full of determination to complete this strangers quest if it meant that he would meet the kings. He stretched his sleepy body and nodded to the black stallion.

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You walk around your kingdom, smelling the fresh air and eating grass when a Pure black stallion from your territory gallops toward you huffing from being tired. He says he has a message for the kings of this kingdom but he's to tired to run any longer. He asks you to deliver the message. What do you do?

1. You Stare confused a the stallion and ask him why should you do it?
2. You refuse, you have better things to do then play messenger.
3. You nod your head and accept the request!
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Lead Horse : crockori.deviantart.com/art/Ho…
Activity : First quest
Featuring : NPC black stallion
Current Kingdom : Kingdom Holts

Art Quality : Full body, drawn background, shaded
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Comments: 22

CSStables [2017-07-31 09:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Aaah this is so beautiful! The horses, the scenery!  I really love how painterly it all looks, and like it could be from a story book <333

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Crockori In reply to CSStables [2017-10-15 11:27:58 +0000 UTC]

That makes me so happy to hear!! Thank you so much for all your kind comments (even though I'm so slow at answering bppbpP)

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jbdezoveelste [2017-07-25 18:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Its so cool! love the watercolour feel of the background

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Crockori In reply to jbdezoveelste [2017-10-15 11:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot!

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Happy-Horse-Stable [2017-07-12 08:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Sooo amazing, gorgeous pic and background <3

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Crockori In reply to Happy-Horse-Stable [2017-10-15 11:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ArcticNomad [2017-07-12 08:14:35 +0000 UTC]

This looks great! The black stallion is so shiny and I really love your horse, so pretty  At first I planned that color for my herd of the Sleipnir horse too but then I went with a chestnut   

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Crockori In reply to ArcticNomad [2017-10-15 11:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot! I think this color is my absolute favoruite! :3

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Ohdotar [2017-07-12 07:35:45 +0000 UTC]

Einvind is the SWEETEST I'm so glad to see you joining in on HotS!
Also geez I hate searching for plant names in English. I just know that vitsippa is valkovuokko in Finnish :'D

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Crockori In reply to Ohdotar [2017-10-15 11:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

The struggle is real! xD

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TheChotta [2017-07-12 03:17:48 +0000 UTC]

SO CUTE!!!! <333 love the colors XD

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Crockori In reply to TheChotta [2017-10-15 11:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Silver-Peak-Arts In reply to TheChotta [2017-07-12 04:46:55 +0000 UTC]

HI. HO. YO. BO. WHO ARE CHU.

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TheChotta In reply to Silver-Peak-Arts [2017-07-13 01:09:57 +0000 UTC]

OMG HAIIIII

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Silver-Peak-Arts In reply to TheChotta [2017-07-13 01:41:42 +0000 UTC]

HAI. STRANGER. <3

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TheChotta In reply to Silver-Peak-Arts [2017-07-13 03:16:07 +0000 UTC]

LONG TIME NO SEE MA FRIENDLY 

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Silver-Peak-Arts In reply to TheChotta [2017-07-13 03:46:56 +0000 UTC]

xDD

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UnicornLover2500 [2017-07-11 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Crockori In reply to UnicornLover2500 [2017-10-15 11:26:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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UnicornLover2500 In reply to Crockori [2017-10-15 19:17:02 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome. 

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Sleipnir-Admins [2017-07-11 22:32:23 +0000 UTC]

RNG Encounter

As you take the request from the black stallion, you move on quickly noticing a colt. It's crying behind a bush. Something must have happened? The little guy seems to be scared and you see some blood on the grass, he's hurt. What do you do?

1. Try to calm him down and ask him what happened. (Possible claim)
2. Ask him for his mother. (possible claim of the colt and the parent) 
3. Chase the colt away, he needs to man up.

Gender : Colt
Age : 1 y/o
Color : Wild Bay
Geno : Ee/A+A+

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Sleipnir-Admins [2017-07-11 22:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Quest

The stallion smiles at you and tell you that some bachelors came here from another kingdom. There are all strong stallions and the messenger cannot chase them away by himself. He tells you where you can find the kings, what do you do next?

1. You Start galloping, there is no time for goofing around!
2.You stay there a little longer to make sure the stallion is ok.
3.You think about that whole thing and decide to go after the bachelors yourself!

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