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Kara-Yami [2018-07-01 21:46:37 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love the background. I like the obvious depth to it, but I would consider next time would consider line thickness for the back areas. Although I can SEE the depth and perspective it would help make it more obvious. I dont love the boy. I find him to be a bit awkward in his proportions and stiff. Especially in the arms and hands. I think what would help to make him more interesting is adding the perspective to him more. Bring his arms and hands forward and such. Other wise I love the authentic pencil look! Great job ^-^
CritiqueCorner
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Cronewitch In reply to Kara-Yami [2018-07-02 10:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the boy is terrible I draw it some years ago. Now I'm a little better. Abut the stifness, I ment it to be stiff (you know ... You can panic as much as you want in a maze with no way out, but it will always be a static environement ... I don't know if I have benne clear ...).
And yes, I was too focused on the details ...
Thank yuo!!!
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Kara-Yami In reply to Cronewitch [2018-07-02 14:57:16 +0000 UTC]
Since the stiffness was on purpose, then its fantastic!! ^-^ I still love the background. I cant even do stairs going a normal direction 😂😂
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