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Published: 2013-08-09 09:52:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 450; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Description "You're not sure?" He shook his head. "I'm never sure." He said those words like they were nothing, like they held no such meaning. But he was missing the whole point.

"This is your mind." He claimed. I didn't know what to believe. First, I'm at my father's Stop & Shop, then suddenly I'm here? Apparently in my mind? It couldn't be possible. It wasn't possible. I told myself those things over and over, but the more I said it, the less truthful they sounded.

This green sweatered man seemed like he didn't know what he was talking about. He claimed that he wasn't sure, so why should I believe him?

His boots clopped on the rocky floor, and he chuckled at me. He was a lot taller than I was, but of course, I was just a short fat kid with emotional issues. I surely looked smaller than him, physically and mentally. I said nothing. He smiled. "You don't believe me?" I stared at him blankly. "What if I told you..."

"I'm you?"
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Comments: 11

PuppyCh0w [2013-08-09 12:15:11 +0000 UTC]

This is an amazing concept with wonderful descriptive back story. if you wrote a novel i would defiantly read it!

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CrookedLynx In reply to PuppyCh0w [2013-08-10 07:51:02 +0000 UTC]

hoooo thank you!! tyvm omg

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PuppyCh0w In reply to CrookedLynx [2013-08-11 20:51:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem at all c:

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PeachesOfWar [2013-08-09 12:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Dangit I love how you draw cats

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CrookedLynx In reply to PeachesOfWar [2013-08-10 07:51:07 +0000 UTC]

gah... thank u

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PeachesOfWar In reply to CrookedLynx [2013-08-10 11:05:10 +0000 UTC]

<3

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SquidGoose [2013-08-09 10:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Unless i'm stupid and that spot is intentional??

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CrookedLynx In reply to SquidGoose [2013-08-10 07:51:36 +0000 UTC]

its probably part of the door frame that i forgot to put lineart for so i just put color LOL

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SquidGoose [2013-08-09 10:06:40 +0000 UTC]

WHite spot between fingers o:


I love your lines omfg and the color palette is nice and clean

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CrookedLynx In reply to SquidGoose [2013-08-10 07:51:42 +0000 UTC]

aah thank you!!!

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CrookedLynx [2013-08-09 09:52:39 +0000 UTC]

upupupu these two have such an interesting story, i had so much fun coming up with it. i COULD WRITE A NOVEL.

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