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Crowdakk In reply to battlesaw [2018-11-14 23:04:12 +0000 UTC]
Ey, thank you for the critique!
I think it's all fair, thank you aginnn. ;; w;
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battlesaw In reply to Crowdakk [2018-11-16 18:48:00 +0000 UTC]
yw otherwise its great
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Crowdakk In reply to Bebe-Emerald [2018-11-13 23:59:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique!
It wasn't harsh at all, you told the truth. xD
I agree with everything you said, and I'll try to work on that in the future. But, I was confused about the oval blood thing?
Those are supposed to be organs (really his intestines sticking out)
if that's what you're talking about ;;
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JoyfullGamer [2018-11-13 14:03:28 +0000 UTC]
This looks awesome, but.. I have a few things to say.
1: The blood would be a bit more vibrant, since it is coming out. Blood is only that colour after it is left for a while.
2: The colours all blend in with one another, making it hard to focus on the main part of the drawing. Maybe change the background to a lighter shade, so Tom will stand out.
3: The pose is a bit stiff, if someone were to get hurt like that they would be leaning more forward. He looks like a solider standing to attention like "Sir, I'm bleeding my life out, sir!" xD
But who am I to judge? This looks amazing none the less!
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Crowdakk In reply to JoyfullGamer [2018-11-13 23:56:14 +0000 UTC]
1. Agreed, next time I'll do that
2.Yeah.. I tried to make some things stand out, but eh I failed xD
Thank you
3.I'll try to work on that, I need to practice poses, lol
Thank you ; p;
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