apexofreality [2018-11-14 00:36:24 +0000 UTC]
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Looks good, and I must say that I am quite jealous of the job you did on the hands.
However, there are some things that don't make the drawing sit quite right, and here they are.
1-Linework. Some people draw with lines, some prefer to remove them later, some use lines that are a similar color to the object, but with vast amounts of shading. The linework on this drawing is a bit strange, with harsh black lines in some parts, but no lines in others? It makes the drawing a bit hard to read.
2- The shading is quite good, I'd advise you use just a bit more, even if you are going for a clean look.
3- Finally, the anatomy is just a bit off. The guy on the right - hand looks strange, and the way they are sitting looks unnatural.
Finally, This was a very nice piece. Keep it up!
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