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CrumbledWings — Let me write you a poem
Published: 2013-04-02 23:56:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1980; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 11
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The awesome cover image was done by ~NadyaBird . A tanka is an extended haiku 5-7-5 7-7. Also the two quotation marked statements beneath the lyric part, are two famous lyrics/sonnets. Sonnet 18 by William Shakespeare and Italian Sonnet by John Deford. Alright so i am relative pleased with this one but i hated one major fact of it: How mydescription almost entirely centered around physical beauty and repeatedly used the same adjectives; however this is my problem which i chose to ignore, so i hope everyone enjoys
. Also used in #Live-Love-Write 's "Best of You" Contest here: [link]
Comments: 6
Give me a moment to sigh Girlishly.
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Okay, I'm done. This is very well thought-out. If you don't mind me asking, how did you change the layout for the deviation?
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You change it into a pdf first. Also i'm glad you enjoyed the piece
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This is really good. The flow is nice
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this is beautiful. it seems to flow right from the source. you are a talented writer
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